Gone Roamin'
Zombie11 total reviews
Comment from Mia Twysted
To think this is what a zombie would be thinking as they emerged back up from the earth. It gives the zombie a playfully feel like they are just roaming around out of boredom instead of trying to eat brains.
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To think this is what a zombie would be thinking as they emerged back up from the earth. It gives the zombie a playfully feel like they are just roaming around out of boredom instead of trying to eat brains.
Comment Written 27-Sep-2021
Comment from samantha0930
I like this poem :)
The picture compliments the poem really well, because the poem tells more of a story, so the picture gives a good visual to enhance the effect of the poem. I like how you used the colors too.
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I like this poem :)
The picture compliments the poem really well, because the poem tells more of a story, so the picture gives a good visual to enhance the effect of the poem. I like how you used the colors too.
Comment Written 27-Sep-2021
Comment from Bill Schott
This zombie 5-7-5, Gone Roamin', has the required formatting and suggests that the walking dead may have a consciousness that gives reason to their deathly walking.
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This zombie 5-7-5, Gone Roamin', has the required formatting and suggests that the walking dead may have a consciousness that gives reason to their deathly walking.
Comment Written 27-Sep-2021
Comment from Patty Palmer
So this is why the zombies are always walking, dragging one leg behind them. They're out roaming the countryside. Do they walk around dead only at night or do they come out during the day too?
Good luck with the contest.
Patty
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So this is why the zombies are always walking, dragging one leg behind them. They're out roaming the countryside. Do they walk around dead only at night or do they come out during the day too?
Good luck with the contest.
Patty
Comment Written 26-Sep-2021
Comment from Wendy G
This is creepy - hope he doesn't roam near me! But it makes for a good entry for the contest. Excellent presentation and image to support your words. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
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This is creepy - hope he doesn't roam near me! But it makes for a good entry for the contest. Excellent presentation and image to support your words. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
Comment Written 26-Sep-2021
Comment from Mary Shifman
Another grim zombie! This is an expressive poem that says much in a few words. The picture is grotesque as it should be for a character who is running around rotting on his feet. Well done. Good luck in the contest.
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Another grim zombie! This is an expressive poem that says much in a few words. The picture is grotesque as it should be for a character who is running around rotting on his feet. Well done. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 26-Sep-2021
Comment from Lana Marie
This one is very good! I like how you formed this one together with the photo as well. Nice 5-7-5 Zombie poem contest entry! Short and very fitting to the Zombie life. I like your title as well. I hope he doesn't roam near me.
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This one is very good! I like how you formed this one together with the photo as well. Nice 5-7-5 Zombie poem contest entry! Short and very fitting to the Zombie life. I like your title as well. I hope he doesn't roam near me.
Comment Written 25-Sep-2021
Comment from pookietoo
A wonderful zombie 575 poem. A great zombie picture too. Keep writing poems like this. Keep smiling and have a wonderful weekend. Good luck and best wishes.
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A wonderful zombie 575 poem. A great zombie picture too. Keep writing poems like this. Keep smiling and have a wonderful weekend. Good luck and best wishes.
Comment Written 25-Sep-2021
Comment from Frank Ball
The words fit the picture to a tee. I suggest "bares" in place of "bore". Still, the meaning remains. Try, for the last line, "not to stay a slave"; the rhyme has some value.
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The words fit the picture to a tee. I suggest "bares" in place of "bore". Still, the meaning remains. Try, for the last line, "not to stay a slave"; the rhyme has some value.
Comment Written 25-Sep-2021
Comment from LisaMay
Uh oh! I'll be running and hiding! The horror-inducing illustration and your ominous words have the desired spine-chilling effect on this nervous reader.
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Uh oh! I'll be running and hiding! The horror-inducing illustration and your ominous words have the desired spine-chilling effect on this nervous reader.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 25-Sep-2021