Comment from Mia Twysted

Excellent

I love the pic that you have with this piece. It is simple yet so right for the poem. The poem shows that even a zombie can love and that is something most people don't see or think. Then there is the fact that the object of the zombie love will not make it through the night and might be turned themself.

 Comment Written 27-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 27-Sep-2021

Thank you for this very nice review, I really appreciate it. :)

Comment from Carol Hillebrenner

Excellent

Odd subject for a writing contest with poetry, but you did a good job with humor and picked a good picture. Best of luck in this writing contest that picked a slightly odd subject.

 Comment Written 27-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 27-Sep-2021

Thanks for reading my poem. It's that time of year I guess, with halloween just around the corner. Thanks again.:)

Comment from Sherry Asbury

Excellent

Wowsie zowie - that artwork rocks and your poem is point on! This is different and I wish you luck in the contest that I, too, entered and see my chances going down to that deep pit!!

 Comment Written 27-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 27-Sep-2021

Thanks so much for this great review. I read and liked all of the entries, I think they all rock. Thanks again. :)

Comment from samantha0930

Excellent

I like your poem, it's really cute :) It also reads well, and it's a really good picture to go with the poem, and I like to font color matching too.

 Comment Written 27-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 27-Sep-2021

Thank you for this great review, it's always,appreciated. :)

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This zombie 5-7-5, Hungry Eyes, has the required formatting and notes that the lust for life means something completely different to zombies.

 Comment Written 27-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 27-Sep-2021

You've got that right! Thanks so much for reading my poem. :)

Comment from Patty Palmer

Excellent

LOL Love at first bite. One bite and she belongs to him forever. But is this guy a vampire or a zombie? Do zombies bite to make another person a zombie? I thought they just eat people. I thought only vampires bite and suck the blood for a meal and then that person becomes a vampire as well. I'm confused! LOL Good luck with the contest.
Patty

 Comment Written 26-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 27-Sep-2021

Thanks so much for this great review. If you are bitten by a zombie but not eaten up, you will turn into one. Vampires have to drain all of the blood from their victims and then they turn into vampire's as well. At least according to all the movies and shows I've watched...lol. Thanks again. :)

Comment from Eternal Muse

Excellent

Oh, this is so much fun! Reminds of an old vampire joke:
"I want to make a small withdrawal from your blood bank.." (lol).

Superb imagery, visuals and presentation. Loved the humor and the choice of artwork. Best of luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 26-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 27-Sep-2021

Thank you so much for reading and for this great review. :)

Comment from tempeste

Excellent

Ciao mystery poet,

You have 4 votes now.

I was half way through reading the entries when I read yours and I knew nothing could best this poem.

You turned gory and the whole revolting flesh eating into something cute.

That's no easy feat. Very creative

The punchline is brilliant!

 Comment Written 26-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 27-Sep-2021

Thank you this terrific review, it means a lot to me. :)

Comment from Wendy G

Excellent

A clever twist on the usual saying of "Love at first sight". The poem is well supported by the graphic image you chose! Well written. Best wishes for your entry in the contest.
Wendy

 Comment Written 26-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 27-Sep-2021

Thank you so much for this wonderful review. :)

Comment from Paul McFarland

Excellent

Pretty good. It's difficult to get so much of a story into so few lines, but you have done it. I'll bet that really hurt when he stepped on her toes.

 Comment Written 26-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 26-Sep-2021

Thanks so much for reading my poem and for this great review. :)