It Is Hot In Here
The heat that happens in a hot tub.2 total reviews
Comment from Cristine22
Ha! Nice flair. Sounds like one hot hot tub. Not what I expected in a haiku. I like that it's all one sentence. That helps flow, which is so important. Great job!
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2021
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Ha! Nice flair. Sounds like one hot hot tub. Not what I expected in a haiku. I like that it's all one sentence. That helps flow, which is so important. Great job!
Comment Written 24-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2021
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Yes I?m learning that I apparently A haiku is supposed to be nature, but the other ones that I?ve read haven?t been nature, so I wasn?t sure. But I?m glad you liked it and thanks for the review
Haiku is usually written in the present tense and focuses on nature (seasons). But for this contest that is not a requirement. Write about anything.
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Right. I guess it would be more accurate to call it a 5-7-5 rather than a haiku. Well done either way. :-)
Comment from SHABAMO
Great use of limited syllables and a picture to show a lovers embrace in a hot tub. In some ways you could argue this is not a classic haiku in that it's not about nature but I'd argue it's quite natural. Good luck in the contsst
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2021
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Great use of limited syllables and a picture to show a lovers embrace in a hot tub. In some ways you could argue this is not a classic haiku in that it's not about nature but I'd argue it's quite natural. Good luck in the contsst
Comment Written 24-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2021
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Well that?s what I was wondering. I read a couple other ones that weren?t nature either. So I wasn?t sure if it needed to be about nature. Thank you for the review.
Haiku is usually written in the present tense and focuses on nature (seasons). But for this contest that is not a requirement. Write about anything.
