Witness
Viewing comments for Chapter 3 "A Million Pieces"Modern struggle in another world.
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Comment from AJ McCall
I am always amazed at the language you manage to weave into your writing. It makes me feel as if I'm there, right alongside Karsa. I feel for her sister. I hope she manages to escape. My heart feels for the situation not just because the writing is so deep but because this actually happens. We Americans don't experience the same things as in other counties to the same extent. Yes, we have injustices but not like Africa or Asia, and the police systems vary. Amazing job, K. I always love reading your posts! Can't wait for the next chapter!!!!
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2021
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I am always amazed at the language you manage to weave into your writing. It makes me feel as if I'm there, right alongside Karsa. I feel for her sister. I hope she manages to escape. My heart feels for the situation not just because the writing is so deep but because this actually happens. We Americans don't experience the same things as in other counties to the same extent. Yes, we have injustices but not like Africa or Asia, and the police systems vary. Amazing job, K. I always love reading your posts! Can't wait for the next chapter!!!!
Comment Written 24-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2021
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Thank you for reading and reviewing. I'm glad it's coming out well. Karsa certainly has a long road ahead. Definitely not a fun one either. I appreciate you giving it the time and I hope you have a good day when you get this.
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You're welcome! Anytime! I hope you're doing well!
Comment from lancellot
Very good. Inside all people is the capacity for love, hate, justice, cruelty and the desire for freedom. If that cowed and denied, it will eventually bubble to the surface with a fury much like a storm. You did a great job conveying this and showing it to the readers.
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2021
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Very good. Inside all people is the capacity for love, hate, justice, cruelty and the desire for freedom. If that cowed and denied, it will eventually bubble to the surface with a fury much like a storm. You did a great job conveying this and showing it to the readers.
Comment Written 24-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2021
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Thank you very much for reading and reviewing! I really appreciate you giving it the time. I hope you have a good day when you get this.
