Comment from Eternal Muse

Excellent

I liked this scientific 5-7-5! (smile). Favorite line - "you're my hydrogen atom". Excellent imagery, visuals and superb presentation.

I wish you the best of luck in the contest, if it's still running.

 Comment Written 26-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 26-Sep-2021

Thanks, EM

Comment from Loren .

Excellent

Now here is a contemporary and exemplified take on the stuff we're being fed today. Science is not as finite as some would want us to believe. As the saying goes, figures lie and liars figure. Well done, Loren

 Comment Written 26-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 26-Sep-2021

Thanks, Loren

Comment from Patty Palmer

Excellent

Cute poem for the contest. Well, at least somebody needs to follow the science about vaccinations because our government isn't. Good luck with the contest.
Patty

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 25-Sep-2021

Thanks, Patty

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Hmm. Is it significant that the hydrogen atom has a single electron? I guess hydrogen is more likely to join in with other atoms? Trying to find the symbolic meaning.
Best wishes in the contest!

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 25-Sep-2021

Hydrogen bonds easily with everything

Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)

Excellent

This 5-7-5 poem speaks to me of an extremely close, fusional couple. I wonder if couples can really be created by chemistry like that. Goog luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 24-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 24-Sep-2021

Thank you, Katherine

Comment from Cristine22

Excellent

A romantic chemistry poem! I love it! Nerd poetry is the best! The concept came across easily. And you've also got good flow, which can be difficult in a haiku. Awesome job!

 Comment Written 24-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 24-Sep-2021

Thanks, Christine

Comment from Mary Shifman

Excellent

This is an interesting poem and quite a creative and unique pitch as a romantic come on, it I've interpreted it correctly. I suppose it could have multiple meanings. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 24-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 24-Sep-2021

Thanks, Mary

Comment from pookietoo

Excellent

A great 575 entry. Keep up the wonderful work writing your poems. A great photo to go with your poem. I wish you a lot of luck in this contest. Keep a smile on your face.

 Comment Written 24-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 24-Sep-2021

Thanks, pook

reply by pookietoo on 24-Sep-2021

You are welcome.

reply by pookietoo on 24-Sep-2021

You are welcome.

Comment from Gert sherwood

Excellent

A great 5-7-5 along with you very tangled image..
I'm not a scientist so I don't I believe--
believe the science

you're my hydrogen atom

become part of me
I could be wrong?

 Comment Written 24-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 24-Sep-2021

Thanks for the look.

reply by Gert sherwood on 24-Sep-2021

You are most welcome blind writer.
Gert

Comment from RodG

Excellent

And are you oxygen? Whatever the combination, it sounds like a successful blend may occur. I like the analogy and the accompanying artwork very much. Rod

 Comment Written 24-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 24-Sep-2021

Thank you, Rod