The Visit
A Writer's Helper49 total reviews
Comment from Alaskastory
"The Visit" speaks an inspiring message that touches the lives of many who live beyond close friends. The beautiful image within the cloud seems to come alive as a most mysterious muse. Well done!
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2021
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"The Visit" speaks an inspiring message that touches the lives of many who live beyond close friends. The beautiful image within the cloud seems to come alive as a most mysterious muse. Well done!
Comment Written 27-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2021
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Thank you for all the stars, I am humbled! Believe everyone has a muse, mine speaks to me in dreams, sometimes has me act out the story as the protagonist. Thanks again, I appreciate your reading in-depth!
irish
Comment from Zhen Xuan Liu
This is a wonderful story. I was captivated the whole time! I love the conversation between the main character and the ethereal woman about his past.
My favorite line is:
"All you have to do is write one true sentence. Write the truest sentence you know."
Great job and keep up the amazing work!
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2021
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This is a wonderful story. I was captivated the whole time! I love the conversation between the main character and the ethereal woman about his past.
My favorite line is:
"All you have to do is write one true sentence. Write the truest sentence you know."
Great job and keep up the amazing work!
Comment Written 26-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2021
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Thank you so much for reading, and the stars! Ernest Hemingway left several great sayings on the art of fictional narrative. I believe everyone has a Muse, you just have to find her.
Thanks again, irish
Comment from Badger_29
Dear irish, I don't know what happened but while I was reading this, tears were streaming down my cheeks. It's good to see you writing again. Your penmanship always stirs deep emotions in me, and this is a great example of provocative writing.
Leaves a lot to the imagination, no? Thank you for setting your great example of writing from the heart.
Blessings,
Brother Badger Cull
Darren
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2021
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Dear irish, I don't know what happened but while I was reading this, tears were streaming down my cheeks. It's good to see you writing again. Your penmanship always stirs deep emotions in me, and this is a great example of provocative writing.
Leaves a lot to the imagination, no? Thank you for setting your great example of writing from the heart.
Blessings,
Brother Badger Cull
Darren
Comment Written 26-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2021
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Thank you, I am so grateful for your support! I sincerely believe everyone has a Muse. Mine speaks to me in dreams, sometime has me acting out the story as the protagonist! Took a long while for me to find my Muse, then sometime to realize what she really was.
Thanks again, irish
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B Blessed
Comment from Mary Vigasin
I find this an enchanting writing of giving life to your muse in a poignant and wonderful story of how the muse inspires writing but also saved his life when he was in his deepest despair.
I truly enjoyed the read.
Regards,
Mary
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2021
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I find this an enchanting writing of giving life to your muse in a poignant and wonderful story of how the muse inspires writing but also saved his life when he was in his deepest despair.
I truly enjoyed the read.
Regards,
Mary
Comment Written 26-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2021
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Hi Mary, thank you for reading, your great comments, and all the stars! I really appreciate your support!
Cheers, irish
Comment from Sanku
This is a fine writing about Muse ,the inspiration behind every writer.The story flowed easily and the background of John's block also came up .The muse saved him when he tried to kill himself .A very good story..Thanks for sharing
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2021
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This is a fine writing about Muse ,the inspiration behind every writer.The story flowed easily and the background of John's block also came up .The muse saved him when he tried to kill himself .A very good story..Thanks for sharing
Comment Written 26-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2021
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Thank you for reading, all the stars, and your in-depth review!
Believe everyone has a Muse, you just have to find her. Mine speaks to me in dreams, sometimes has me act out the story so I get a real feel for the emotions.
Cheers, irish
Comment from humpwhistle
Either you are very lucky, or very clever, irish. My muse looks like Victor McGlaughlin, and sounds like Jerry Lewis.
This is a very tender story of longing for something to take the place of something irreplaceable. You're sensitive guy, and a hell of a writer.
Good luck with Thalia.
Peace, Lee
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2021
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Either you are very lucky, or very clever, irish. My muse looks like Victor McGlaughlin, and sounds like Jerry Lewis.
This is a very tender story of longing for something to take the place of something irreplaceable. You're sensitive guy, and a hell of a writer.
Good luck with Thalia.
Peace, Lee
Comment Written 25-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2021
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Wow, thank you for your in-depth review, and the galaxy of stars!
I realize I am a little crazy(Who the hell isn't?), but I do have a mystery lady who speaks to me in dreams and sometimes has me act out the story as the protagonist, so I experience the emotions, helps me write it out. Believe everyone has a Muse, you just have to find her.
Cheers, irish
Comment from Eunice Amero
Very good story. Called: 'Writer's Block' I get that way. Very interesting. There are so many things to write about but sometimes our minds just gets the best of us and makes us think wow what will I write? How will I start it? You did a good job.
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2021
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Very good story. Called: 'Writer's Block' I get that way. Very interesting. There are so many things to write about but sometimes our minds just gets the best of us and makes us think wow what will I write? How will I start it? You did a good job.
Comment Written 25-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2021
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Thank you for reading, your kind review, and the stars! Think we all have a Muse somewhere, just need to find her.
Cheers, irish
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Yes sure I agree. You are more than welcome
Comment from NANCY V. FORREST
I love this. It is so true to the experience those of us with muses havve,although mine tends to flit in and out eaving me with a phrase of a line or a thought to ponder in its wake. I love the description of the process, metaphoic or not. (maybe its the Irish blood...)
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2021
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I love this. It is so true to the experience those of us with muses havve,although mine tends to flit in and out eaving me with a phrase of a line or a thought to ponder in its wake. I love the description of the process, metaphoic or not. (maybe its the Irish blood...)
Comment Written 25-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2021
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Hi Nancy! Thank you for reading, your in-depth review and comments, and all those stars! Think everyone has a Muse, just need to find her.
Cheers, irish
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Comment from nomi338
Those of us who are fortunate to recognize respect and heed the counsel and inspiration of our particular muse benefit so much from allowing our muse to do the thing they are best at doing. That is to lead us to where we need to be.
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2021
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Those of us who are fortunate to recognize respect and heed the counsel and inspiration of our particular muse benefit so much from allowing our muse to do the thing they are best at doing. That is to lead us to where we need to be.
Comment Written 25-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2021
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Thank you for reading, your excellent comments, and all those stars! Yes, I think everyone has a Muse somewhere, just need to find her and let her lead!
Cheers, irish
Comment from Cogitator
My name is John and I can relate to this quite readily. Walk a mile in my shoes is the message here. (for me.) It's a shame we can't get FanStorians together on a cruise ship for a week. Pass the word and I'll arrange it....John
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2021
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My name is John and I can relate to this quite readily. Walk a mile in my shoes is the message here. (for me.) It's a shame we can't get FanStorians together on a cruise ship for a week. Pass the word and I'll arrange it....John
Comment Written 25-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2021
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Hi again John, thank you for reading, and you also read 'between the lines,' and got the message. And hey, great idea about the cruise, that would not only be a lot of fun, but would also be very instructive, getting ideas from the pros.
Cheers, irish
