Running Blind
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Comment from Sankey
I see Mr De Woody is back again. This was as usual a great read. A few suggestions. The full day...singular so change the following...Another full day of investigations [were](was) not uncommon...I think you said "were" on the basis of the plural investigations which was not right.
EITHER All the known exits [points] OR All the known exit[s] points
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2021
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I see Mr De Woody is back again. This was as usual a great read. A few suggestions. The full day...singular so change the following...Another full day of investigations [were](was) not uncommon...I think you said "were" on the basis of the plural investigations which was not right.
EITHER All the known exits [points] OR All the known exit[s] points
Comment Written 26-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2021
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Thank you for the super star shine and helpful critique. I had originally fixed that area and left and extra word. Oops.... Me eyes are acting up. Thanks for catching that, bro. ;))
Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs...
Comment from BethShelby
As usual, I look forward to your weekly chapters and I'm never diappointed. with you intriguing stories.
Alfanza doesn't like his odds and doesn't care for the idea of pleading insanity as his lawyer suggested he should. He thinks ratting someone out might get him a better deal.
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2021
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As usual, I look forward to your weekly chapters and I'm never diappointed. with you intriguing stories.
Alfanza doesn't like his odds and doesn't care for the idea of pleading insanity as his lawyer suggested he should. He thinks ratting someone out might get him a better deal.
Comment Written 26-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2021
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Thank you for the lovely review and insightful comments. This will help you in the ending chapters. Stay tuned! Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs...
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
Tony is scheming to get rid of Eugene. Meanwhile, Eugene's DNA is waiting to be identified. Analiese is being escorted to a safe house and there is high alert everywhere. They are all aware of the tenseness surrounding every aspect and person involved, until the trial.
Ralf
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2021
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Tony is scheming to get rid of Eugene. Meanwhile, Eugene's DNA is waiting to be identified. Analiese is being escorted to a safe house and there is high alert everywhere. They are all aware of the tenseness surrounding every aspect and person involved, until the trial.
Ralf
Comment Written 26-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2021
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Thank you for the excellent review and insightful comments. I'm glad you're staying with me. Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs...
Comment from Begin Again
Bravo! Your characters are brewing and stewing and ready to pull whatever trick they can to gain the upper hand. I feel something creepy about the warden, though. Alfanzi might be thinking he's going to get a pat on the back from the warden for hanging Eugene out to dry, but....
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And anyone who says you have my word on it...makes him questionable.
Nice job!
Hugs, Carol
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2021
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Bravo! Your characters are brewing and stewing and ready to pull whatever trick they can to gain the upper hand. I feel something creepy about the warden, though. Alfanzi might be thinking he's going to get a pat on the back from the warden for hanging Eugene out to dry, but....
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And anyone who says you have my word on it...makes him questionable.
Nice job!
Hugs, Carol
Comment Written 26-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2021
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Thank you for the wonderful review and kind compliments. So glad you like! Blessings dear,
Sal XOs...
Comment from Loren .
Ewew, please tell me gator burgers are not a real thing! This story moves along at a fast clip. What I admire most is the research that must have gone into it to make its authenticity believable. The characters are ones you root for... the good guys of course. Loren
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2021
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Ewew, please tell me gator burgers are not a real thing! This story moves along at a fast clip. What I admire most is the research that must have gone into it to make its authenticity believable. The characters are ones you root for... the good guys of course. Loren
Comment Written 26-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2021
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Thank you for the wonderful review and generous stars, Loren! My, now good it is to see you and how blessed I am by this. Yes, gator burgers are real. Just had some on vacation. Taste like chicken. ;))
Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs...
Comment from Judy Lawless
This is another excellent chapter. Sally. The dialogue and descriptions take us to the locations nicely. Great writing.
One note: "I was about the(to) entertain a gator burger as soon as the place down the road opened."
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2021
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This is another excellent chapter. Sally. The dialogue and descriptions take us to the locations nicely. Great writing.
One note: "I was about the(to) entertain a gator burger as soon as the place down the road opened."
Comment Written 26-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2021
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Thank you for the lovely review and helpful critique. I had fixed that in edit and lost internet. Thanks for seeing this and alerting me. I appreciate you!, :))
Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs?
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You're welcome, Sally.
Comment from Ric Myworld
"A group of alligators is called a congregation," about like those congregations that gather in the two front-row pews to devour the good names of any they can gossip about. LOL. Just a joke with no ill intentions. Just brought to mind a chosen few I've known their whole lives and thought alligators fit the bill. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2021
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"A group of alligators is called a congregation," about like those congregations that gather in the two front-row pews to devour the good names of any they can gossip about. LOL. Just a joke with no ill intentions. Just brought to mind a chosen few I've known their whole lives and thought alligators fit the bill. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 26-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2021
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Thank you for the wonderful review and generous comments. Yes, my husband thought that was funny as well, especially the brethren part. Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs..
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I don't trust a word Tony Alfanzi says, not a word. I hope the warden listens very carefully. I really like this story and feel Sally is ready to get back to work. LOL You are doing a good job of writing.
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2021
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I don't trust a word Tony Alfanzi says, not a word. I hope the warden listens very carefully. I really like this story and feel Sally is ready to get back to work. LOL You are doing a good job of writing.
Comment Written 26-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2021
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Thank you for the lovely review and generous compliments. Both mean so much. Sending you my best today as always,
Sally XOs
Comment from rockinm76233
enjoyed your chapter of crime and mayhem and it all takes place in Louisiana. Very exciting to write mysteries I think, what is your favorite genre to write?
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2021
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enjoyed your chapter of crime and mayhem and it all takes place in Louisiana. Very exciting to write mysteries I think, what is your favorite genre to write?
Comment Written 26-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2021
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Welcome to FanStory, by the way. Thank you for the great review and kind compliments. Both are so appreciated. So glad you like. This is my fourth crime novella here on FanStory. I am published through Amazon Kindle for my first in the series: What The Blind Girl Saw. Many of my FS followers have been with me all along the way but many are new. I welcome all.
I write short stories, love stories, true stories from my childhood, historical writing, (The Wash Woman is a recent post and contest win and at the first page of my portfolio), and faith-based writing. I am a poetess as well. I?m blind with Retinitis Pigmentosa and write and post as much as I am able. Thanks, again!
Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs?
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Sorry for the question marks above. I am on a backup device today. Sal {Smiles}
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Oh how wonderful that you don't let your blindness stop you from writing your stories. I know you see them in your mind as you write and thats wonderful.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Yes! You posted on a Sunday!! I think I'd be worried, too, if I were Anna, but I'm sure everything is in order. But, that lying toerag, Alfanzi, he's dropped Eugene in it well and truly. This is getting so close now, and still you are bringing up more problems for Sal and her team. Well done!! Can't wait for the next part. :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2021
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Yes! You posted on a Sunday!! I think I'd be worried, too, if I were Anna, but I'm sure everything is in order. But, that lying toerag, Alfanzi, he's dropped Eugene in it well and truly. This is getting so close now, and still you are bringing up more problems for Sal and her team. Well done!! Can't wait for the next part. :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 26-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2021
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Thank you, dear lady. What a kind and wonderful review. I'm super blessed by this quick response and star shower. I'm so glad you're enjoying this.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs
