Running Blind
Viewing comments for Chapter 19 "Running Blind~Chapter Nineteen"The Blind Girl's toughest cold case.
31 total reviews
Comment from lyenochka
So good to see Russ DeWoody back even if for just a cameo. That's a nice way to keep your regular readers connecting the books! Glad that Analiese is safe. Hoping that Tony's plans backfires on him.
I was about the entertain a gator burger (I was about to?]
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2021
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So good to see Russ DeWoody back even if for just a cameo. That's a nice way to keep your regular readers connecting the books! Glad that Analiese is safe. Hoping that Tony's plans backfires on him.
I was about the entertain a gator burger (I was about to?]
Comment Written 28-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2021
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Thank you for the wonderful review and helpful critique. I vphad changed that line when edit went crazy. I found many things that didn?t save. Thank you so much! Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs?
Comment from WalkerMan
In this new chapter we see that Dr. Marie MacLavish will have plenty of evidence to examine for DNA at the cabin where Analiese had been. plus what Jean-Baptiste had found nearby, including Eugene's wad of chewing tobacco. Meanwhile, Tony Alfanzi realizes her assassination must have failed; so, in desperation, he gives Eugene's name to the warden of the prison where he is being held until trial for the murder of art curator, Duran Gibbons, and uninvolved Lonnie Hastings. Analiese is safe (at least for the moment) in Alabama with Russ DeWoody, en route to his Christmas tree farm. Clearly, more pages must be turned before justice prevails and all at risk can feel safe.
As usual, the situations are plausible, the dialog is realistic, and the details bring us into each scene as though we are there.
Superb.
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2021
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In this new chapter we see that Dr. Marie MacLavish will have plenty of evidence to examine for DNA at the cabin where Analiese had been. plus what Jean-Baptiste had found nearby, including Eugene's wad of chewing tobacco. Meanwhile, Tony Alfanzi realizes her assassination must have failed; so, in desperation, he gives Eugene's name to the warden of the prison where he is being held until trial for the murder of art curator, Duran Gibbons, and uninvolved Lonnie Hastings. Analiese is safe (at least for the moment) in Alabama with Russ DeWoody, en route to his Christmas tree farm. Clearly, more pages must be turned before justice prevails and all at risk can feel safe.
As usual, the situations are plausible, the dialog is realistic, and the details bring us into each scene as though we are there.
Superb.
Comment Written 27-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2021
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Thank you for the superb review and kind compliments and stars. I'm so glad to have you with me. Sending you my very best,
Sal :))
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You are most welcome, Sal. You certainly know how to keep me turning pages. :)) -- Mike
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
Very good; kept my attention like a magnet. I'm getting more familiar with the characters and assume you live in the South as you have a very Southern ambiance going. Of course, gators are a clue. There was one sentence I didn't quite get; "Good, I was about the entertain . . ." Looking forward to the next installment. May I fan you?
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2021
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Very good; kept my attention like a magnet. I'm getting more familiar with the characters and assume you live in the South as you have a very Southern ambiance going. Of course, gators are a clue. There was one sentence I didn't quite get; "Good, I was about the entertain . . ." Looking forward to the next installment. May I fan you?
Comment Written 27-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2021
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Thank you for the excellent review and kind compliments. Entertain as in contemplate or think about. Sending you my best today as always,
Sal :))
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hello Sal.
Finding the house full of DNA is like finding a goldmine. They will certainly have all the evidence they need and now they need to connect the crimes to the evidence.
With Ana being in a "safe house" at this point she can begin to feel a little more comfortable about her future. It's an interesting situation because she is subject to being charged with crimes as well.
PAL Z
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2021
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Hello Sal.
Finding the house full of DNA is like finding a goldmine. They will certainly have all the evidence they need and now they need to connect the crimes to the evidence.
With Ana being in a "safe house" at this point she can begin to feel a little more comfortable about her future. It's an interesting situation because she is subject to being charged with crimes as well.
PAL Z
Comment Written 27-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2021
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Thank you for the lovely review and generous stars, dear Z. Sending you my best today as always,
Sal :))
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You're welcome Sal.
PAL Z
Comment from pookietoo
A great story. It was a nice one to read. I bet you love writing stories like this. Smile, and the world will smile with you. Take care of yourself. :)
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2021
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A great story. It was a nice one to read. I bet you love writing stories like this. Smile, and the world will smile with you. Take care of yourself. :)
Comment Written 27-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2021
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Thank you for the lovely review of my book chapter. It is most appreciated. Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs...
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You are welcome.
Comment from Mary Kay Bonfante
Oh, if it isn't Russ DeWoody! I'm so happy to see him again. This was yet another exciting chapter of your story, with many exciting developments. Here is my list of errors and suggestions:
Something had gone horribly wrong with the assassination of Analise,
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Something had gone horribly wrong with the assassination of Analiese,
He assessed other options as he paced about his 8 X10 cell.
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He assessed other options as he paced about his 8x10 cell.
Tony grabbed his jacket; submitting himself to a pat down.
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Tony grabbed his jacket, submitting himself to a pat down.
"Lead on.... I can't tell you how nice it will be to stretch my legs and enjoy a smoke."
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"Lead on ... I can't tell you how nice it will be to stretch my legs and enjoy a smoke."
drugs, porn... murder for hire."
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drugs, porn ... murder for hire."
"You don't say..... Got a name?"
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"You don't say.... Got a name?"
Trial witness Analiese Irving, only had two weeks to go. Two weeks until her testimony ...
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Trial witness Analiese Irving, only had two weeks to go; two weeks until her testimony ...
and wanted to be free of ex-husband's crimes and guilty associations, regardless of the cost.
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and wanted to be free of her ex-husband's crimes and guilty associations, regardless of the cost.
"Are you cold, miss?"
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"Are you cold, Miss?"
"Call me, Russ.
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"Call me Russ.
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Now a congregation of alligators? This is a very educational bit of information, but it's definitely not my type of church, lol.
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2021
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Oh, if it isn't Russ DeWoody! I'm so happy to see him again. This was yet another exciting chapter of your story, with many exciting developments. Here is my list of errors and suggestions:
Something had gone horribly wrong with the assassination of Analise,
-->
Something had gone horribly wrong with the assassination of Analiese,
He assessed other options as he paced about his 8 X10 cell.
-->
He assessed other options as he paced about his 8x10 cell.
Tony grabbed his jacket; submitting himself to a pat down.
-->
Tony grabbed his jacket, submitting himself to a pat down.
"Lead on.... I can't tell you how nice it will be to stretch my legs and enjoy a smoke."
-->
"Lead on ... I can't tell you how nice it will be to stretch my legs and enjoy a smoke."
drugs, porn... murder for hire."
-->
drugs, porn ... murder for hire."
"You don't say..... Got a name?"
-->
"You don't say.... Got a name?"
Trial witness Analiese Irving, only had two weeks to go. Two weeks until her testimony ...
-->
Trial witness Analiese Irving, only had two weeks to go; two weeks until her testimony ...
and wanted to be free of ex-husband's crimes and guilty associations, regardless of the cost.
-->
and wanted to be free of her ex-husband's crimes and guilty associations, regardless of the cost.
"Are you cold, miss?"
-->
"Are you cold, Miss?"
"Call me, Russ.
-->
"Call me Russ.
***
Now a congregation of alligators? This is a very educational bit of information, but it's definitely not my type of church, lol.
Comment Written 26-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2021
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Thank you for the super kind review and generous six stars, dear one. The improvements are great and so needed. I a,ways appreciate your expert eye. Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs...xo...
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You're very welcome, Sally. It's always a pleasure. I don't know how you keep up with all your reviews. I just did a few posts recently, and I'm pooped.
God bless you, my friend.
Love always, Mary Kay xoxo
Comment from Ben Colder
Well, we got her hid out for now, and we might call this thing solved yet with the Ex in jail as he should be. Now, we play hid and seek. Good one, Sal. Thanks for sharing
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2021
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Well, we got her hid out for now, and we might call this thing solved yet with the Ex in jail as he should be. Now, we play hid and seek. Good one, Sal. Thanks for sharing
Comment Written 26-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2021
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Thank for the super review and generous stars, dear Ben. I'm so glad you are enjoying this. Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs...
Comment from Wendy G
An enjoyable chapter, with Alfanzi trying to weasel his way out of disaster of his own personal making. Thanks for the explanation of DeWoody in the notes. Hoping Analiese will be safe from her husband, even though she has done wrong. Looking forward to the next.
Wendy
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2021
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An enjoyable chapter, with Alfanzi trying to weasel his way out of disaster of his own personal making. Thanks for the explanation of DeWoody in the notes. Hoping Analiese will be safe from her husband, even though she has done wrong. Looking forward to the next.
Wendy
Comment Written 26-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2021
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Thank you for the excellent review and kind compliments, dear Wemdy. Blessings always,
Sally XOs...
Comment from royowen
So, Tony Alfanzi is plotting to kill people, namely his wife for one, who is willing to testify against him, and Tony knows that if she is dead, the case could be lost for lack of evidence, mind you it is a darn good way of "getting off" with things, I think it's time to get the momentum of the story going Dear Sally. Well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2021
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So, Tony Alfanzi is plotting to kill people, namely his wife for one, who is willing to testify against him, and Tony knows that if she is dead, the case could be lost for lack of evidence, mind you it is a darn good way of "getting off" with things, I think it's time to get the momentum of the story going Dear Sally. Well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 26-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2021
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Thank you for the excellent review and kind comments. Both are so appreciated. Blessings always,
Sal XOs...
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Most welcome Sally.
Comment from Ulla
Hi Sally, this is a terrific continuation to the story, but that scumbag, Tony Alfanzi, is not only lying, but now he's also trying to land Eugene in it. I sure hope Analiese will be safe where they're taking her. A great continuation. Ulla xxx
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2021
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Hi Sally, this is a terrific continuation to the story, but that scumbag, Tony Alfanzi, is not only lying, but now he's also trying to land Eugene in it. I sure hope Analiese will be safe where they're taking her. A great continuation. Ulla xxx
Comment Written 26-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2021
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Thank you for the lovely review and super star, Ulla dear. I'm delighted you've enjoyed my book. Sending you my very best,
Sal XOs...
