Haiku (shortcomings of fall)
When daylight comes up short -57 total reviews
Comment from Seshadri_Sreenivasan
Yes. It's humorous in a dark kind of way! I lied the accompanying picture which is so expressive and goes with the haiku. Brilliant job! Thanks for sharing!
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2021
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Yes. It's humorous in a dark kind of way! I lied the accompanying picture which is so expressive and goes with the haiku. Brilliant job! Thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 23-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2021
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Hi Seshadri,
Oh thank you very much for a wonderful review. I?m glad I gave you a chuckle :))
Have a wonderful day,
Senyai
Comment from NABattaglia
Haha nice poem, it is so true. We all feel this way as the darkness starts creeping in waaaaay too soon. You portrayed that in this piece in a pretty fun way. Thanks for sharing!
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2021
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Haha nice poem, it is so true. We all feel this way as the darkness starts creeping in waaaaay too soon. You portrayed that in this piece in a pretty fun way. Thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 23-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2021
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Hi NABattaglia,
Thank you kindly for a most enjoyable review and thoughts on my silly Haiku.
Stay cheerful as the days grow short as it is officially the season of the pumpkin and turkey LOL
Take care :))
Senyai
Comment from Giddy Nielsen-Sweep
This is clever and funny. I enjoyed your notes, explaining where the cartoon comes from because I have read her before but didn't know the background. A most enjoyable and funny haiku which has taught me something, Giddy
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2021
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This is clever and funny. I enjoyed your notes, explaining where the cartoon comes from because I have read her before but didn't know the background. A most enjoyable and funny haiku which has taught me something, Giddy
Comment Written 23-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2021
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Hi Giddy,
Thank you for such a sweet review and thoughts. Yes, fall is officially here now?. but you are down in Queensland so you are just now heading into spring :))
Take care,
Senyai
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Hi Giddy,
Thank you for such a sweet review and thoughts. Yes, fall is officially here now?. but you are down in Queensland so you are just now heading into spring :))
Take care,
Senyai
Comment from Mama Baer
Wonderful! Fantastic! So very clever and witty. I thought about the Autumn Equinox today. Thanks for adding to my private little celebration. Lovely work.
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2021
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Wonderful! Fantastic! So very clever and witty. I thought about the Autumn Equinox today. Thanks for adding to my private little celebration. Lovely work.
Comment Written 23-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2021
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Hi Mama Baer,
Oh thank you! Yes, it is officially fall now?the season of the pumpkin and turkey LOL.
Take care,
Senyai
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Hi Mama Baer,
Oh thank you! Yes, it is officially fall now?the season of the pumpkin and turkey LOL.
Take care,
Senyai
Comment from juliaSjames
Wry humour here which is the best approach to SAD..The satori is clever with its play on words. Time to turn up our inner light when the season turns.
Nice take on the club challenge since the poem correlates well with the quirky illustration.
Stay safe healthy and blessed
Julia
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2021
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Wry humour here which is the best approach to SAD..The satori is clever with its play on words. Time to turn up our inner light when the season turns.
Nice take on the club challenge since the poem correlates well with the quirky illustration.
Stay safe healthy and blessed
Julia
Comment Written 23-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2021
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Hi Julia,
Thanks so much for a stunning review and thoughts! Yes, here comes the season of the pumpkin and turkey lol.
Take care,
Senyai
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Hi Julia,
Thanks so much for a stunning review and thoughts! Yes, here comes the season of the pumpkin and turkey lol.
Take care,
Senyai
Comment from damommy
The only thing I don't like about winter are the shorter days. But they don't last long, thank goodness. I agree with Crabby Road. It hardly seems worthwhile to get up. Especially with all the lockdowns. hahahahaha
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2021
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The only thing I don't like about winter are the shorter days. But they don't last long, thank goodness. I agree with Crabby Road. It hardly seems worthwhile to get up. Especially with all the lockdowns. hahahahaha
Comment Written 22-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2021
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Hi Damommy,
Hahahaha! Yes, you are so right. We are now in the season of the pumpkin and turkey lol.
Thanks for a lovely review and thoughts. Much appreciated :))
Take care,
Senyai
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Hi Damommy,
Hahahaha! Yes, you are so right. We are now in the season of the pumpkin and turkey lol.
Thanks for a lovely review and thoughts. Much appreciated :))
Take care,
Senyai
Comment from Janetsue
While this is actually a senryu because MOOD is not really a concrete thing but is related to feelings, I enjoyed your posting and selected artwork a lot. I also agree entirely with the message. The dwindling hours of daylight affect a lot of people and I can understand the desire to just sleep away winter. If I were a bear, I would be curled up inside a cave right now dreaming about spring. lol
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2021
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While this is actually a senryu because MOOD is not really a concrete thing but is related to feelings, I enjoyed your posting and selected artwork a lot. I also agree entirely with the message. The dwindling hours of daylight affect a lot of people and I can understand the desire to just sleep away winter. If I were a bear, I would be curled up inside a cave right now dreaming about spring. lol
Comment Written 22-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2021
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Hi Spangle,
You are so right. I guess my Haiku is a Senryu then. I should have thought of that. Thanks for pointing that out.
Yes, S.A.D. is a real thing and we are now officially in the season of the pumpkin and turkey so bears beware, we could all join them lol.
Thanks for a informative and delightful review!
Always,
Senyai
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Hi Spangle,
You are so right. I guess my Haiku is a Senryu then. I should have thought of that. Thanks for pointing that out.
Yes, S.A.D. is a real thing and we are now officially in the season of the pumpkin and turkey so bears beware, we could all join them lol.
Thanks for a informative and delightful review!
Always,
Senyai
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You're most welcome. :-)
Comment from harmony13
The author's words and are clever, interesting, descriptive and creative.
I enjoyed the read of this poem - it did make me smile. The poem flows
and connects well. When the time changes I want to be home before it
is dark. Hope you are doing well.....Maria
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2021
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The author's words and are clever, interesting, descriptive and creative.
I enjoyed the read of this poem - it did make me smile. The poem flows
and connects well. When the time changes I want to be home before it
is dark. Hope you are doing well.....Maria
Comment Written 22-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2021
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Hi Maria,
Thank you so much for a delightful review and thoughts. I am well and hope you are the same :))
Take care,
Senyai
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Hi Maria,
Thank you so much for a delightful review and thoughts. I am well and hope you are the same :))
Take care,
Senyai
Comment from Katie Mae Dead
It's that lack of vitamin D the sun gives. I have a touch of that SAD (seasonal affective disorder) so I know what you mean.
Nice humorous haiku. I love the satori...
Moods get moodier.
Your picture and poem gave me a much needed chuckle.
Take care,
Katiemae
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2021
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It's that lack of vitamin D the sun gives. I have a touch of that SAD (seasonal affective disorder) so I know what you mean.
Nice humorous haiku. I love the satori...
Moods get moodier.
Your picture and poem gave me a much needed chuckle.
Take care,
Katiemae
Comment Written 22-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2021
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Hi KatieMae,
I thank you for a delightful review and thoughts? yes, SAD is quite common. Its official ? the season of the pumpkin and turkey is upon us as days grow short and the weather turns cooler.
Take care :))
Senyai
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Hi KatieMae,
I thank you for a delightful review and thoughts? yes, SAD is quite common. Its official ? the season of the pumpkin and turkey is upon us as days grow short and the weather turns cooler.
Take care :))
Senyai
Comment from Janice Canerdy
You have made excellent use of your seventeen syllables in this skillfully written, clever piece. Fall does affect some people as you have described.
I love fall. Good use of dry humor
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2021
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You have made excellent use of your seventeen syllables in this skillfully written, clever piece. Fall does affect some people as you have described.
I love fall. Good use of dry humor
Comment Written 22-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2021
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Hi Janice,
Thank you kindly for such a lovely review and thoughts. Season of pumpkins and turkey is officially upon us as days grow shorter and weather grows cooler.
Take care :))
Senyai
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Hi Janice,
Thank you kindly for such a lovely review and thoughts. Season of pumpkins and turkey is officially upon us as days grow shorter and weather grows cooler.
Take care :))
Senyai
