Comment from royowen

Excellent

I just love the artwork it illustrates your haiku almost perfectly, but there is certainly a serious side to your poem, indeed weather can play a big part in mood and motivation, well done, blessings Roy.

 Comment Written 21-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 22-Sep-2021

Hi Roy,

Thank you for your great review and thoughts. Yes, the seasonal change to fall with the shortened daylight hours does play on one?s moods.

Best to make hay while the sun shines as they say LOL.

Have a wonderful week, my friend :))

Always,
Senyai

reply by the author on 22-Sep-2021

Hi Roy,

Thank you for your great review and thoughts. Yes, the seasonal change to fall with the shortened daylight hours does play on one?s moods.

Best to make hay while the sun shines as they say LOL.

Have a wonderful week, my friend :))

Always,
Senyai

reply by royowen on 22-Sep-2021

Well done

Comment from kahpot

Excellent

Exactly, it is funny how the weather and the change of seasons can also change our mood, great artwork and I agree with her, an excellent Haiku for the club, very well presented****kahpot

 Comment Written 21-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 22-Sep-2021

Hi Kahpot,

Thanks very much for a great review and interesting thoughts on my silly Haiku. Your encouragement means so much.

Have a wonderful week :))

Always,
Senyai

reply by the author on 22-Sep-2021

Hi Kahpot,

Thanks very much for a great review and interesting thoughts on my silly Haiku. Your encouragement means so much.

Have a wonderful week :))

Always,
Senyai

Comment from irishauthorme

Excellent

A twist on the dark side of Fall Humor, and a true precursor of what is to come. Our emotions are, without a doubt, affected by the weather and the time of year. It is sad to see the gold and orange leaves, so beautiful on the trees, reduced to a sodden mess on the ground. The colorful blooms are all dying, as is the vegetable gardens.
Nothing to be very happy about, except we have Halloween, Thanksgiving and Christmas coming, oh well.
irish

 Comment Written 21-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 22-Sep-2021

Hi Irish,

You are spot on with your feelings? and the bright notes of Halloween, Thanksgiving and Christmas and ?don?t forget Valentines Day bring joy in the shortened days. So there?s that you so aptly point out LOL.

Thank you for an interesting and honest review, Irish :))

Have a good week,
Senyai

reply by the author on 22-Sep-2021

Hi Irish,

You are spot on with your feelings? and the bright notes of Halloween, Thanksgiving and Christmas and ?don?t forget Valentines Day bring joy in the shortened days. So there?s that you so aptly point out LOL.

Thank you for an interesting and honest review, Irish :))

Have a good week,
Senyai

Comment from Paul McFarland

Excellent

You got that right. And the farther north you live, the darker it gets. Try this:

Fall equinox comes.
Summer days are old alums.
Let's break out the mums.

 Comment Written 21-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 21-Sep-2021

Hi Paul,

I love your haiku (contemporary haiku) it is phenomenal! But I was informed traditional haiku cannot rhyme :(

So I had to make sure of that?this was written for Gypsy Blue Rose?s Haiku Club event? check it out if you?re interested. Go to the link that says Social then select Clubs and it will take you there.

Thanks for a great review and chuckle :))

Senyai

reply by Paul McFarland on 21-Sep-2021

I can't help rhyming. I'm not a Haiku fan, but I took a course that was taught by one of my friends and she won me over a little.

reply by the author on 22-Sep-2021

Try the Club Event with Gypsy Blue Rose? it?ll be fun, Paul :))

I?m getting ?the hang of haiku? just a little bit LOL

❤️

Comment from Theodore McDowell

Excellent

the comic is very funny, the haiku is more of a statement of the effects of fall on moods and is slightly more of a take on actual reality! Well done for the club. I love your Haikus, especially the one about the cat in the fog.

 Comment Written 21-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 21-Sep-2021

Hi Tim,

Thank you for your thoughts on this silly haiku. Thought I?d join Gypsy?s Club?

Hope this seasonal change eases us into fall without the S.A.D.

Have a good week, chin up, shoulders back? (my own morning orders)

Always,
Senyai

Always

Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-Great artwork and
nice presentation, Senyai.
-I didn't know that about
Maxine, either.
-You wrote a good haiku
to go with it.
-The syllable count is good,
along with effective nature
and seasonal imagery.
-The closing line is very good, too,
and happens to many people!

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 Comment Written 21-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 22-Sep-2021

Hi Pam,

Oh thank you kindly for a most encouraging review and thoughts on my silly Haiku for Gypsy?s Haiku Club event. Trying to get "the hang of haiku" LOL

Have a wonderful week, Pam :))

Always,
Senyai

reply by the author on 22-Sep-2021

Hi Pam,

Oh thank you kindly for a most encouraging review and thoughts on my silly Haiku for Gypsy?s Haiku Club event. Trying to get "the hang of haiku" LOL

Have a wonderful week, Pam :))

Always,
Senyai

reply by Pam (respa) on 22-Sep-2021

You are very welcome, Senyai. I liked your "silly haiku!"

Comment from dragonpoet

Excellent

This his a good haiku using alliteration and consonance well.
Though my moods don't change until winter
Keep writing and stay healthy
Interesting artwork
Joan

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 Comment Written 21-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 22-Sep-2021

Hi Joan,

Thanks for such a thoughtful and reflective review and thoughts. Your encouragement is so appreciated and means so much.

Getting the "hang of haiku" with Gypsy Blue Rose?s Haiku Club.

Have a great week, Joan :))

Always,
Senyai

reply by the author on 22-Sep-2021

Hi Joan,

Thanks for such a thoughtful and reflective review and thoughts. Your encouragement is so appreciated and means so much.

Getting the "hang of haiku" with Gypsy Blue Rose?s Haiku Club.

Have a great week, Joan :))

Always,
Senyai