Comment from Anne Johnston

Excellent

Great comment on the change that fall brings. The days do get shorter all of a sudden it seems. The weather here feels like summer but it is dark so early. Well done on this

 Comment Written 23-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 24-Sep-2021

Hi Anne,

Oh yes, the fall Equinox has arrived bringing our first days of fall and with it progressively shorter days. Less sunlight can bring on a bit of the blues but there?s pumpkins, brightly colored leaves and delicious turkey to offset the mood :))

Thanks, Anne for another encouraging review and interesting thoughts.

Always,
Senyai

reply by Anne Johnston on 24-Sep-2021

You are welcome

Comment from Ulla

Excellent

Hi there, this is a beautiful haiku and it's very funny as well. I loved it. There's only one huge problem with it. A haiku is always, always written in lower case. If you changed that it would win the day. I'm surprised nobody has told you. Ulla:)))

 Comment Written 23-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 24-Sep-2021

Hi Ulla,

Thank you thank you! I will change is right away. I knew that and overlooked that important aspect of the traditional haiku.

Your review was detailed and informative, much appreciated! :))

Always,
Senyai

Comment from Jesse James Doty

Excellent

This is more true than funny, at least, not like Haha what a humorous poem. So moods get moodier, that may be true for some while others love the autumn and winter months.
I love summer best and spring next. I love the sunshine and it's being light for most of the day. Thank you for sharing and for letting me share, as well.
Have a wonderful afternoon,
Jesse

 Comment Written 23-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 24-Sep-2021

Hi Jesse,

Oh thank you sir, for a delightful review and thoughts! I love fall too, but the shorter days plays havoc with my circadian rhythm lol.

Have a great weekend,
Senyai

reply by Jesse James Doty on 24-Sep-2021

Thank you for your comments, too. I don't like the shorter days, as well. Anyway, have a wonderful weekend, yourself!
Jesse

Comment from jenintorre

Excellent

I am not a great lover of Haiku but I really appreciate this one. It is very funny and makes sense. I love the artwork and presentation. All the best. Jen.

 Comment Written 23-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 24-Sep-2021

Hi Jenintorre,

Oh my, so pleased you got a kick out of my silly haiku. Maxine (cartoon character) never disappoints LOL. Thank you very much for such a generous review and thoughts. I appreciate your input.

Have a good weekend coming up.

Always,
Senyai

reply by the author on 24-Sep-2021

Hi Jenintorre,

Oh my, so pleased you got a kick out of my silly haiku. Maxine (cartoon character) never disappoints LOL. Thank you very much for such a generous review and thoughts. I appreciate your input.

Have a good weekend coming up.

Always,
Senyai

Comment from Gloria ....

Exceptional

Oh Maxine always knows how to set the mood, doesn't she?

I think this is a terrific haiku, and the moos get moodier shows the brilliance of language in simplicity.

Definitely a top of the line work here, and I'm still smiling. :)

Gloria

 Comment Written 23-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 24-Sep-2021

Hi Gloria,

Oh, thank you very much for your review and encouraging comments! I value your input so I am pleased you liked this silly offering for Gypsy?s Club.

Of course, I?m purring over your gift of six! Thank you thank you, my friend.

Loved your Flying Cat? so so adorable and with a difficult poetry form no less. :))

Have a good weekend,

Senyai

reply by the author on 24-Sep-2021

Hi Gloria,

Oh, thank you very much for your review and encouraging comments! I value your input so I am pleased you liked this silly offering for Gypsy?s Club.

Of course, I?m purring over your gift of six! Thank you thank you, my friend.

Loved your Flying Cat? so so adorable and with a difficult poetry form no less. :))

Have a good weekend,

Senyai

Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock

Excellent

Hilarious, but true. I just hate that it gets dark at four-thirty in the afternoon. So, we have less than ten hours of daylight. The sooner that is over, the better. I'll never get used to it.

Ralf

 Comment Written 23-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 24-Sep-2021

Hi Ralf,

I want to thank you for such an amusing yet encouraging review and thoughts! LOL, I?m with you?the short days play havoc with my circadian rhythms?. We need sunlight to make us lighter in spirit? they say Vitamin D helps a whole lot in the amount of at least 5,000 IU daily.

So pleased my silly haiku gave you a chuckle :))

Have a good weekend, Ralf

Always,
Senyai

reply by the author on 24-Sep-2021

Hi Ralf,

I want to thank you for such an amusing yet encouraging review and thoughts! LOL, I?m with you?the short days play havoc with my circadian rhythms?. We need sunlight to make us lighter in spirit? they say Vitamin D helps a whole lot in the amount of at least 5,000 IU daily.

So pleased my silly haiku gave you a chuckle :))

Have a good weekend, Ralf

Always,
Senyai

Comment from MissMerri

Exceptional

I love this humorous haiku, Senyai. It is clever and amusing and meaningful all at once. It is also very nicely presented. I think it is deserving of six stars.

 Comment Written 23-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 24-Sep-2021

Hi MissMerri,

Oh my. Thank you for a wonderful review. So pleased you got a chuckle out my silly haiku for Gypsy?s Club event. Your kind spirit and keen sense are always welcome, my friend.

Your gift of six warmed me from my chilly nose to my cold feet ?thank you! ❤️

Have a wonderful Friday and coming weekend.

Always,
Senyai

reply by the author on 24-Sep-2021

Hi MissMerri,

Oh my. Thank you for a wonderful review. So pleased you got a chuckle out my silly haiku for Gypsy?s Club event. Your kind spirit and keen sense are always welcome, my friend.

Your gift of six warmed me from my chilly nose to my cold feet ?thank you! ❤️

Have a wonderful Friday and coming weekend.

Always,
Senyai

Comment from roof35

Excellent

This illustration matches perfectly with your words and sets the stage for a chuckle. I enjoyed this funny Haiku. Many of us get a little blue with the short days. Nicely done.

 Comment Written 23-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 23-Sep-2021

Hi Roof,

Oh thank you so much for a great review and thoughts? yes, the shorter days do make for less sun and darker dispositions Lol

Have a great day :))
Senyai

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very cute, funny, but so true haiku you have penned. Sometimes it feels like I just get o.k. with the time and then it changes again! You used great words and very nice imagery. love and blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 23-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 23-Sep-2021

Hi Teri,

Oh thank you so much for a sweet and encouraging review and thoughts!

Yes, I?m with you, Teri! Daylight Savings Time is looming on the horizon and that will bring ANOTHER change after we?ve just acclimated to the shorter days and less sun. Lol

Have a good day :))
Senyai

reply by the author on 23-Sep-2021

Hi Teri,

Oh thank you so much for a sweet and encouraging review and thoughts!

Yes, I?m with you, Teri! Daylight Savings Time is looming on the horizon and that will bring ANOTHER change after we?ve just acclimated to the shorter days and less sun. Lol

Have a good day :))
Senyai

Comment from Jasmine Girl

Excellent

Haha. I like the poem and the words in the cartoon to sum it up. This poem is a funny Haiku and syllable count is good. I also like the alliteration in the second and third line.

Well done.

 Comment Written 23-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 23-Sep-2021

Hi Lisa,

Oh thank you so much for a lovely review and encouraging thoughts!

Yes, Maxine (cartoon) has my sentiments exactly. But I do love fall too with its colorful leaves, pumpkins and turkey :))

Have a wonderful day,
Senyai