Comment from Elizabeth Emerald

Excellent

I like it! Apt title for the theme. Phrasing is fine in itself--not sure how it's supposed to flow in this form. Also, check the rules for reversal to make sure the variations you used are allowed--one thing I know to fix:

[extra word: OMIT The] clouds can conceal a smiling sun.

 Comment Written 21-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 27-Sep-2021

Yes I removed that .Thank you very much for the encouragement

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very beautiful and a very well written poem you have penned for the potlatch poetry entry. You used very nice imagery from the art work you chose and great descriptive and true words. Best wishes in the contest. Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 21-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 27-Sep-2021

Thank you very much for this encouraging review

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

Yes, God is there for us and always will be. When we stray he will wait for us to return and welcome us with open arms. Thank you for sharing this club entry with us. I enjoyed reading.

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 Comment Written 21-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 27-Sep-2021

Thank you very much .

Comment from susand3022

Excellent

Hi Sanku,
Let's hear it for a plan... I'd like a plan... I wish someone would let me in on it. I seem to be stumbling into all of the curves lately. lol... Nicely done. :)

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 Comment Written 21-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 27-Sep-2021

I know .believe me i too feel like it sometime .but stil it is a kind of self motivation .Thanks a lot for dropping by.