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As I glance at you

My wife has long hair, I envision the wind teasing it

3 total reviews 
Comment from Kamrynn June
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

I'm always a sucker for romantic poetry like this:) Very beautifully written in a sweet simple way. Good luck to you in this contest!

Sincerely

-K

 Comment Written 23-Sep-2021

reply by the author on 23-Sep-2021
    Thank you for your kind review
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2021
    6 stars - you're the best, thanks K
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2021
    6 stars - you're the best, thanks K
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2021
    6 stars - you're the best, thanks K
reply by Kamrynn June on 23-Sep-2021
    you are very welcome:)
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2021
    6 stars - you're the best, thanks K
Comment from Pam (respa)
Excellent
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-A nice presentation.
-The syllable count is good,
along with the topic.
-A nice tribute to your wife
as you picture "the wind dancing
in her hair."
-A very good concluding line.
-Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 21-Sep-2021

reply by the author on 21-Sep-2021
    Thank you
reply by Pam (respa) on 21-Sep-2021
    You are welcome.
Comment from rspoet
Excellent
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You've written an excellent senryu for the contest
with the 5-7-5 syllables and very good description
of the emotional tie to imagery.
Well done.
Best wishes.
Robert

 Comment Written 21-Sep-2021

reply by the author on 21-Sep-2021
    Thank you for your kind review
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2021
    Thank you for your kind review
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2021
    Thank you for your kind review