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Eighteen

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13 total reviews 
Comment from Sherry Asbury
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

What a life you have had! Thank you for all your service - I love this country so...You tell your story in a cohesive manner and without a lot of, or any, gobbledegook. Thank you for sharing this inspirational and honest telling.

 Comment Written 21-Sep-2021


reply by the author on 22-Sep-2021
    Thanks again Sherry!
Comment from Ric Myworld
Excellent
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Your memories make for great reading and prod my imagination to wonder about all those other memories that I'm guessing you wouldn't be so open in telling. Thanks for sharing.

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 Comment Written 21-Sep-2021


reply by the author on 22-Sep-2021
    Thanks Ric. I?m still learning my way around the site, so please excuse this post of gratitude if I?ve already messaged you.
    As an aside, I just released Chapter 4 of Pocatello Promise. I think you might like how the story is continuing and look forward to your review.
    Yardier
Comment from Pantygynt
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

This should have been entered into a non fiction contest. Most of the non fiction stories I read here are incredibly boring but that is something this could never be. It was such a joy as an ex Royal Marines officer to read a personal account of the Viet Nam wat that was not high on angst and heroin.

Mind you, you had a more interesting job out there than the did average grunt.

Having hung your gun up in the armoury you are not making a bad attempt at showing that the pen can be mightier than the sword.

 Comment Written 21-Sep-2021


reply by the author on 22-Sep-2021
    Thanks Pantygynt. I?m still learning my way around the site, so please excuse this post of gratitude if I?ve already messaged you.
    Perhaps you would consider becoming a fan in order to receive notice when my work is posted?
    As an aside, I just released Chapter 4 of Pocatello Promise. I think you might like how the story is continuing and look forward to your review.
    Yardier