Comment from papa55mike

Excellent

There are so many people dealing with those fears today. Like sending their children to school. What a wonderfully written poem.

Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike

 Comment Written 21-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 06-Dec-2021

Thanks for reveiwing zanya

Comment from BethShelby

Excellent

This is a very up to date ABC poem that speaks to what is happening in work places where people have worked from home during the pandemic and not they are going back to offices without really being sure they are safe. The must be visceral sensations of unease. I know I would uneasy.
Good entry for this contest.

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 Comment Written 20-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 06-Dec-2021

Thanks for reviewing zanya

Comment from Gloria ....

Excellent

I do enjoy the subtle humour here. I can imagine the offices will be scrubbed within an inch of their lives, but the dust is metaphorical, and all the more visceral on account of that most apt observation.

Really good work here, zanya. I with you great luck with the Committee. :))

Gloria

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 Comment Written 20-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 06-Dec-2021

Great reveiw zanya

Comment from artisart4u

Exceptional

Yes, that is probably how a lot of people felt and feel.
It will take a while to get back to feeling normal.
Your poem is ABC.
Good luck with your poem.

 Comment Written 20-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 06-Dec-2021

Apology for late reply & thanks again for those 6 twinkling stars zanya