Dusty desk !
ABC poetry24 total reviews
Comment from royowen
A most worthwhile entry in this ABC poetry contest Zanya. You've done a great job, such advanced letters in the alphabet. Yes I must admit this is a strange time we live in, and it lowered its sinister shadow quickly. Well done, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2021
A most worthwhile entry in this ABC poetry contest Zanya. You've done a great job, such advanced letters in the alphabet. Yes I must admit this is a strange time we live in, and it lowered its sinister shadow quickly. Well done, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 22-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2021
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Thanks for reading and a great reveiw zanya
Comment from Raul1
This poem meets the requirements for the contest. I could see that this business man can go crazy of his messy desk. Excellent work! Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2021
This poem meets the requirements for the contest. I could see that this business man can go crazy of his messy desk. Excellent work! Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 22-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2021
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Great reveiw zanya
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Good artwork and
nice presentation, zanya.
-Effective imagery describes
the sensation of entering one's
workplace after such a long time.
-"Squeaky office locks" is a
good way to begin.
-It must be a strange
sensation that many people
are going through.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2021
-Good artwork and
nice presentation, zanya.
-Effective imagery describes
the sensation of entering one's
workplace after such a long time.
-"Squeaky office locks" is a
good way to begin.
-It must be a strange
sensation that many people
are going through.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 22-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2021
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Great reveiw zanya
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You are welcome, zanya.
Comment from nomi338
Since I have been retired for more than ten years, I have no idea how my old workplace must now look like. I can imagine that it probably looks like a ghost town. I have learned that many of my old co-workers have either also retired or transferred to other locations as well. I have no idea of how things must now look. Truth, I do not really care.
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2021
Since I have been retired for more than ten years, I have no idea how my old workplace must now look like. I can imagine that it probably looks like a ghost town. I have learned that many of my old co-workers have either also retired or transferred to other locations as well. I have no idea of how things must now look. Truth, I do not really care.
Comment Written 22-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2021
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Thanks for reviewing zanya
Comment from Bill Schott
This ABC poem, Dusty Desk, follows the STUV first-letter theme and notes that the return to the workplace might feel like wading into a germ pit to wait for death.
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2021
This ABC poem, Dusty Desk, follows the STUV first-letter theme and notes that the return to the workplace might feel like wading into a germ pit to wait for death.
Comment Written 22-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2021
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Thanks for reviewing zanya
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A clever and poignant poem with well chosen words here Zanya to describe the opening up of a dormant office after the pandemic, getting back to normal takes time and patience. Much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2021
A clever and poignant poem with well chosen words here Zanya to describe the opening up of a dormant office after the pandemic, getting back to normal takes time and patience. Much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 22-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2021
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Thanks for reviewing zanya
Comment from Hitcher
A post pandemic workplace in a post pandemic world, a world full of squeaky locks on dust covered doors. Doors some may and some mat not be allowed to step through. A different world for sure. Good Luck!!
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2021
A post pandemic workplace in a post pandemic world, a world full of squeaky locks on dust covered doors. Doors some may and some mat not be allowed to step through. A different world for sure. Good Luck!!
Comment Written 22-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2021
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Thanks for reading zanya
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"Dust Desk!", is an extremely well-written and tongue-twisting piece. It was a pleasure to both read and review this talented poet's work. Good luck with the contest. Please let me know how you got on?
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2021
"Dust Desk!", is an extremely well-written and tongue-twisting piece. It was a pleasure to both read and review this talented poet's work. Good luck with the contest. Please let me know how you got on?
Comment Written 21-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2021
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Thanks for reading zanya
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zanya, you're very welcome.
Bless you and have a great week,
the Duchess
Comment from Mary Shifman
I'm retired, thankfully, but many of my friends are returning to the workplace. It seems to be a mixed bag for some. There are those who are burned out at the isolation of working at home and eager to get back into the swing of things so that they can be with people and talk face to face. Others worry about going back where they may be exposed to carriers or unvaccinated individuals. This is a well written poem with a humorous tilt to a sobering subject. Good luck in the conrest.
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2021
I'm retired, thankfully, but many of my friends are returning to the workplace. It seems to be a mixed bag for some. There are those who are burned out at the isolation of working at home and eager to get back into the swing of things so that they can be with people and talk face to face. Others worry about going back where they may be exposed to carriers or unvaccinated individuals. This is a well written poem with a humorous tilt to a sobering subject. Good luck in the conrest.
Comment Written 21-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2021
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Thanks for reviewing zanya
Comment from Sherry Asbury
Your artwork looks like me when I sit down at my desk...clever choice. I had a bit of trouble with the letters but finally figured it out. I wish you luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2021
Your artwork looks like me when I sit down at my desk...clever choice. I had a bit of trouble with the letters but finally figured it out. I wish you luck in the contest!
Comment Written 21-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2021
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Thanks for reading zanya