Dusty desk !
ABC poetry24 total reviews
Comment from jenintorre
I really like this 5 line poem. It conjures up a very vivid picture of the post pandemic office. I wish you lots of luck in the competition. Best wishes. Jen
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2021
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I really like this 5 line poem. It conjures up a very vivid picture of the post pandemic office. I wish you lots of luck in the competition. Best wishes. Jen
Comment Written 24-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2021
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Thanks for a great review zanya
Comment from Katie Mae Dead
Oh how i wish I had a six for you! This is great, well written and very funny.
You made good use of your letters, you have nice pacing and the message is relevant. I have a good feeling about this one.
Good luck!
Katiemae Dead
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2021
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Oh how i wish I had a six for you! This is great, well written and very funny.
You made good use of your letters, you have nice pacing and the message is relevant. I have a good feeling about this one.
Good luck!
Katiemae Dead
Comment Written 24-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2021
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Great review zanya
Comment from Wendy G
Very clever entry for the contest. Yes, it is a whole new world - and all that dust will need to be cleaned well before people resume going into their former workplace, with at least an initial sense of unease. Well done. Best wishes.
Wendy
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2021
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Very clever entry for the contest. Yes, it is a whole new world - and all that dust will need to be cleaned well before people resume going into their former workplace, with at least an initial sense of unease. Well done. Best wishes.
Wendy
Comment Written 24-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2021
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Great reveiw zanya
Comment from karenina
A very well written ABC poem about a most timely topic...addressing the new anxiety rippling throughout the world as workers come out of their ZOOM worlds and begin, again, returning to the workplace in real time...
while the pandemic still looms. Karenina
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2021
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A very well written ABC poem about a most timely topic...addressing the new anxiety rippling throughout the world as workers come out of their ZOOM worlds and begin, again, returning to the workplace in real time...
while the pandemic still looms. Karenina
Comment Written 23-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2021
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Yes a superb review zanya
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I really love the ABC poetry form. You wrote this so well!
Karenina
Comment from Jasmine Girl
Total agree. Desks are dusty and snacks have gone bad. And we will lose our offices, too. Since we only go to office two days per week, the management will ask us to share offices with each other.
I'm on my way out very soon. I'm so used to stay at home.
Well done.
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2021
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Total agree. Desks are dusty and snacks have gone bad. And we will lose our offices, too. Since we only go to office two days per week, the management will ask us to share offices with each other.
I'm on my way out very soon. I'm so used to stay at home.
Well done.
Comment Written 23-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2021
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Yes returning to the office feels like a scary moment -thanks for reviewing zanya
Comment from roof35
I like this poem and it speaks to how many of us feel as your post is very topical. Your illustration matches well with your words. This is very nicely done.
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2021
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I like this poem and it speaks to how many of us feel as your post is very topical. Your illustration matches well with your words. This is very nicely done.
Comment Written 23-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2021
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Great reveiw zanya
Comment from Teri7
Zanya, This is a very well written ABC poem you have penned for the contest. You used very good and very true descriptive words and very cute imagery from the art work you chose. Best wishes in the contest. love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2021
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Zanya, This is a very well written ABC poem you have penned for the contest. You used very good and very true descriptive words and very cute imagery from the art work you chose. Best wishes in the contest. love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 23-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2021
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Great reveiw - thanks for reviewing zanya
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
Where is his mask?LOL. Yes, all those things would happen when the group returns to the office that has been closed down for almost two years. So much dust! This is good.
Ralf
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2021
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Where is his mask?LOL. Yes, all those things would happen when the group returns to the office that has been closed down for almost two years. So much dust! This is good.
Ralf
Comment Written 23-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2021
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Great reveiw - like that humorous touch zanya
Comment from Mama Baer
Hehe, fantastic! I love this!! Exactly how it feels, too. At my work, we are all "rusty" in getting things done. Some are masked, some are not, all are a bit uneasy. Thanks for your skillful wording; so clever!
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2021
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Hehe, fantastic! I love this!! Exactly how it feels, too. At my work, we are all "rusty" in getting things done. Some are masked, some are not, all are a bit uneasy. Thanks for your skillful wording; so clever!
Comment Written 23-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2021
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Great review zanya
Comment from l.raven
Hi Zanya, I know their has to be a lot
of people in this same position...you get back
to work...and it's dusty...dirty...and where do we go
from here...
I love your poem my sweet friend...and the picture says it all....very well written...love Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2021
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Hi Zanya, I know their has to be a lot
of people in this same position...you get back
to work...and it's dusty...dirty...and where do we go
from here...
I love your poem my sweet friend...and the picture says it all....very well written...love Linda xxoo
Comment Written 22-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2021
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Thanks for reading -apology for delayed reply zanya
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that's ok Zanya...I fall behind myself...
your so very welcome...love xxoo
