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In The Presence of Jehovah!

ABC contest entry

21 total reviews 
Comment from Cristine22
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This expresses my feelings for Jesus Christ as well. I'm so grateful for His goodness and presence in my life. I love reading others' experiences and feelings.

 Comment Written 24-Sep-2021

reply by the author on 25-Sep-2021
    Thank you Christina for this great review and your very lovely comments. Jesus is our everything and will always be! Thanks for sharing. love and blessings, Teri
Comment from pookietoo
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A very nice poem, but used the letter n instead of m. I wish you a lot of luck on this contest. Keep enjoying writing great poems that people will enjoy!

 Comment Written 24-Sep-2021

reply by the author on 25-Sep-2021
    Thank you so much for the great review and your very nice comments. love and blessings, Teri
reply by pookietoo on 25-Sep-2021
    You are not going to put a m line?
reply by pookietoo on 25-Sep-2021
    You aren't going to put an m line instead of n?
reply by pookietoo on 25-Sep-2021
    You're not going to change the n line to an n?
Comment from pharp
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Teri,

You have penned an excellent poem for the ABC Poetry writing prompt.

Your message is clear and accurate. We can always feel safe in the arms of our Lord and Savior. He is always there in our time of need.

Thanks for sharing, the very best to you in the contest.

Hugs...Portia

 Comment Written 23-Sep-2021

reply by the author on 25-Sep-2021
    Thank you so much Portia for the great review and your very lovely and so true comments. love and blessings, teri
Comment from Bill Schott
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This ABC poem, The Presence of Jevovah, follows the IJKL first-letter theme and reminds the readers to acknowledge God and His power and grace.

 Comment Written 22-Sep-2021

reply by the author on 22-Sep-2021
    Thank you so much Bill for the great review and your very lovely and true comments. Blessings, Teri
Comment from Janetsue
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God hears all the prayers of His beloved children. It will be beyond wonderful being in His presence for eternity. I enjoyed your ABC poetry contest entry, Teri. Best wishes!

 Comment Written 21-Sep-2021

reply by the author on 21-Sep-2021
    Amen dear friend. It will be wonderful being with Jesus forever. Thank you for the great review and very nice comments. love and blessings, Teri
Comment from Begin Again
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I am struggling to remind myself that he has the plans for our lives and he will shelter us when the time is right. My heart believes but my mind is terrified in the place it dwells right now.

Hugs, Carol

 Comment Written 21-Sep-2021

reply by the author on 21-Sep-2021
    Thank you Carol for this great review and your comments. I will pray for you my dear friend. I can't imagine what you are going through but God knows all about it. I love you and am praying for you! love, Teri
reply by Begin Again on 21-Sep-2021
    Thank you
Comment from Sherry Asbury
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How lovely to find another poem of love to He Who gave us breath! I love your line at the end. It is the perfect way to start each day. I so enjoy your writing!!

 Comment Written 21-Sep-2021

reply by the author on 21-Sep-2021
    Thank you so much for the great review and your lovely and true comments. love and blessings, Teri
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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You gain much pleasure and comfort in your beliefs Teri and it shows in your work and your daily life, feeling this kind of peace and tranquility is something everyone envies, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 20-Sep-2021

reply by the author on 21-Sep-2021
    Thank you so much Dolly for the great review and your very kind and so true comments. love and blessings, teri
Comment from Pam (respa)
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-Lovely image, Teri.
-You wrote a good poem
showing your feelings of
"peace, joy, and love."
-Those are good qualities.
-It is good to look for
guidance each day
and ask for help, too.
-A very small suggestion:
Maybe: my mind focused on Him
-Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 20-Sep-2021

reply by the author on 21-Sep-2021
    Thank you Pam for the great review, lovely comments and advice. love and blessings, Teri
reply by Pam (respa) on 21-Sep-2021
    You are very welcome, Teri.
Comment from Paul McFarland
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In this short poem, you have given us a description of your relationship with God, and also given us some good advice. Good luck in the ABC poetry contest.

 Comment Written 20-Sep-2021

reply by the author on 21-Sep-2021
    Thank you so much Paul for the great review and your very nice comments. May God bless you my friend. Teri