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At Summers End

a very short poem

11 total reviews 
Comment from mermaids
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There is a feeling of sadness in your words as the end of summer is painted clearly in your words. Children are associated with summer and when school begins, summer is at an end. There are emotions and feelings in your words.

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 Comment Written 19-Sep-2021


reply by the author on 20-Sep-2021
    I am always amazed at the sudden silence in my neighborhood when school begins in the fall, and this saddens me. Many thanks for sharing my poem.