Comment from Anne Johnston

Excellent

"But, overall life has been great.
What happens yet I must await.
Let tomorow come, let me see,
what yet awaits, what's facing me."
I like your optimistic attitude, your poems are a delight to read.

 Comment Written 19-Sep-2021

Comment from Ulla

Excellent

Absolutely, mu words exactly. Our life is what it's been, that we cannot change. It's been for better or worse, and now all we can do is to look what the future will bring. I loved your poem. Ulla:)))

 Comment Written 19-Sep-2021

Comment from Eternal Muse

Excellent

This was a great sonnet about your life. It reminds me of Sinatra's song "My Way":

I lived the life that's full,
I travelled each and every highway
But more.. much more than this -
I did it my way!"

You had a wonderful life - like all, you made mistakes but that did not deter you. You are a great poet, I always enjoy reading your work.

Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 19-Sep-2021

Comment from Sherry Asbury

Excellent

Me too, but you are much closer than I...each day is an adventure and a
chance to learn to be a better person, as you have done. This is fine writing and very well-done.

 Comment Written 19-Sep-2021

Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

Looking Forward
by jaybird1

Beautiful poem about life yearning through the years. The rhymes do not seem forced. Your poem flows well. It draws on emotions and it presents strong images.

 Comment Written 19-Sep-2021

Comment from SHABAMO

Excellent

A good and well written poem reflecting on the many twists and turns of life! A pleasure to read and I also hope you make it to a hundred years. Keep writing :-)

 Comment Written 19-Sep-2021

Comment from Janet Foor

Excellent

I hope there is more to tell as well. I always "look forward" to reading your sonnets with your wit, wisdom and sage advice and encouragement.

Well done.
Blessings
Janet

 Comment Written 19-Sep-2021

Comment from Mary Vigasin

Excellent

I am rooting for you as are many others. We look forward to not only the grace of your words but the wisdom in them.
Your latest offering is no exception.
Regards
Mary

 Comment Written 19-Sep-2021

Comment from nancy_e_davis

Excellent

Good luck with your ambitions, Bill. I am in for the long haul too, as long as I'm not a drag on my family. I love life, even as dull as it is. LOL you certainly have the correct attitude to make it. Nancy:)

 Comment Written 19-Sep-2021

Comment from rockinm76233

Excellent

another good one Jaybird. Keep writing. I hate they force additional words, sometimes a few words is all it takes. But, to make them happy I've continued to write.

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 Comment Written 19-Sep-2021