Looking Forward
What may await51 total reviews
Comment from BethShelby
Life is like tha,t with laughter and tears and wins and losses but overall if you can life has been great then you are well ahead of the game. You poetry is always a pleasure to read. Looking forward to the future is the best way I know to succeed in having a future. I expect you will make it way past a 100. My husband used to say "lets not put a limit on it. We're not stamped with an expiration date.
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Life is like tha,t with laughter and tears and wins and losses but overall if you can life has been great then you are well ahead of the game. You poetry is always a pleasure to read. Looking forward to the future is the best way I know to succeed in having a future. I expect you will make it way past a 100. My husband used to say "lets not put a limit on it. We're not stamped with an expiration date.
Comment Written 19-Sep-2021
Comment from zanya
A poem in celebration of the joy of living every day - what a tonic ! and the final line is filled with more good days to come - thanks for sharing and cheering up Fanstorians !
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A poem in celebration of the joy of living every day - what a tonic ! and the final line is filled with more good days to come - thanks for sharing and cheering up Fanstorians !
Comment Written 19-Sep-2021
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Yes, you are right. Look ahead and believe in positive thoughts about the future. Your poem has a great message. I enjoyed reading it, the rhymes were good, and the flow was smooth.
Respectfully, Jan
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Yes, you are right. Look ahead and believe in positive thoughts about the future. Your poem has a great message. I enjoyed reading it, the rhymes were good, and the flow was smooth.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 19-Sep-2021
Comment from mermaids
I hope you reach 100 years of age. Excellent poem that is positive and full of life. I like the line where you are overlooking regret, food for thought and a line of wisdom. Excellent poem that encourages the reader.
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I hope you reach 100 years of age. Excellent poem that is positive and full of life. I like the line where you are overlooking regret, food for thought and a line of wisdom. Excellent poem that encourages the reader.
Comment Written 19-Sep-2021
Comment from lyenochka
What a great way to live! Thank you for telling us not to dwell on the regrets but to be grateful for life and look forward to what the Lord has in store of us in the future!
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What a great way to live! Thank you for telling us not to dwell on the regrets but to be grateful for life and look forward to what the Lord has in store of us in the future!
Comment Written 19-Sep-2021
Comment from LJbutterfly
Your poetry is always compelling and thought provoking. We've all learned lessons from our past, based on successes and mistakes. Each day we should thank God for another opportunity to begin again. Life is a beautiful journey.
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Your poetry is always compelling and thought provoking. We've all learned lessons from our past, based on successes and mistakes. Each day we should thank God for another opportunity to begin again. Life is a beautiful journey.
Comment Written 19-Sep-2021
Comment from June Sargent
With a positive attitude and sheer determination, you should reach your goal of 100 years. Imagine living an entire century! What memories you have stored away in your treasure chest of emotions. Thank you for sharing your gems with us.
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With a positive attitude and sheer determination, you should reach your goal of 100 years. Imagine living an entire century! What memories you have stored away in your treasure chest of emotions. Thank you for sharing your gems with us.
Comment Written 19-Sep-2021
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
We all hope we have more time left, Jay, some do, but some don't. We must make the most of the here and now. You've written another excellent, wise poem, my friend. Well done. :)) Sandra xxx
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We all hope we have more time left, Jay, some do, but some don't. We must make the most of the here and now. You've written another excellent, wise poem, my friend. Well done. :)) Sandra xxx
Comment Written 19-Sep-2021
Comment from Raul1
I have enjoyed reading your piece of poetry. It's beautifully written. The sentences flow with clarity. It is interesting and unique. Excellent work! Thank you for sharing!
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I have enjoyed reading your piece of poetry. It's beautifully written. The sentences flow with clarity. It is interesting and unique. Excellent work! Thank you for sharing!
Comment Written 19-Sep-2021
Comment from nancyjam
It does no good to look back at past mistakes. but it never hurts to remember the joys and good times.
Keep looking forward with joy and hope and you will make it to 100m I'm
sure, Best of luck. Enjoy a good life.
Nancy
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It does no good to look back at past mistakes. but it never hurts to remember the joys and good times.
Keep looking forward with joy and hope and you will make it to 100m I'm
sure, Best of luck. Enjoy a good life.
Nancy
Comment Written 19-Sep-2021
