Choose wisely
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Comment from RGstar
This is a very good mono rhymed poem.
God end rhymes. Yes, I think a little shorter would have sent it to the heights it deserves, yet, take nothing away. Well thought out.
A very well done.
Best wishes.
RGstar
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2021
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This is a very good mono rhymed poem.
God end rhymes. Yes, I think a little shorter would have sent it to the heights it deserves, yet, take nothing away. Well thought out.
A very well done.
Best wishes.
RGstar
Comment Written 20-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2021
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Many thanks. It's hard for me to not ramble. I appreciate the acumen...John
Comment from royowen
Of course hatred destroys the hater not the hatred, (unless hatred gives lives legs) Christ gives good advice, wearing innocence like a child, choosing to trust, or forgiving, service to others is quite often the most difficult, be willing to ckean toilets if necessary. Pride is the biggy. "Haughtiness comes before a fall, pride before before destruction" Proverbs 16:18. You've written a fine poem, mostly in mono rhyme, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2021
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Of course hatred destroys the hater not the hatred, (unless hatred gives lives legs) Christ gives good advice, wearing innocence like a child, choosing to trust, or forgiving, service to others is quite often the most difficult, be willing to ckean toilets if necessary. Pride is the biggy. "Haughtiness comes before a fall, pride before before destruction" Proverbs 16:18. You've written a fine poem, mostly in mono rhyme, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 20-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2021
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Thanks, Roy...John
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Most welcome
Comment from karenina
Despite the pre-pre Christmas season this rings of hope and calling on our better selves to step ahead of each of our biases or indifferences to others. So true that "We must admit we are the same..." Used to be they'd say walk a mile in another's shoes before passing judgement... Where'd THAT sentiment go? Thanks for the uplifting message!
Karenina
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2021
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Despite the pre-pre Christmas season this rings of hope and calling on our better selves to step ahead of each of our biases or indifferences to others. So true that "We must admit we are the same..." Used to be they'd say walk a mile in another's shoes before passing judgement... Where'd THAT sentiment go? Thanks for the uplifting message!
Karenina
Comment Written 20-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2021
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My pleasure...John
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Important poem! I hope more give it some thought and try!
K
Comment from Margot A.C. Rose
Good work! I love the incorporation of recent events into your poetry. I would only personally suggest to make sure the writing flows and everything makes sense grammatically and logically. Thank you for sharing!
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reply by the author on 20-Sep-2021
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Good work! I love the incorporation of recent events into your poetry. I would only personally suggest to make sure the writing flows and everything makes sense grammatically and logically. Thank you for sharing!
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Comment Written 20-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2021
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Welcome to FS...John
Comment from Teri7
This is a very beautiful and very well written poem you have penned. I love the title - Choose Wisely. You used very good descriptive words that said so much. Thank you for sharing. Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2021
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This is a very beautiful and very well written poem you have penned. I love the title - Choose Wisely. You used very good descriptive words that said so much. Thank you for sharing. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 20-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2021
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I am Humbled. Thank you much...John
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You are so welcome John!
Comment from barbara.wilkey
It would be wonderful if our government would open their eyes and see how they are destroying our country. I wish many others would open their eyes and see what's really going on. My husband says their brainwashed. Who knows. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2021
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It would be wonderful if our government would open their eyes and see how they are destroying our country. I wish many others would open their eyes and see what's really going on. My husband says their brainwashed. Who knows. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 20-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2021
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Thank you...John
Comment from Patty Palmer
This is a nice Christmas poem to celebrate the upcoming holiday season that looms just around the corner. Our local Christmas store already has their "Christmas Land" open already. I love the holiday and all the festivities that go with it. Good job!
Patty
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2021
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This is a nice Christmas poem to celebrate the upcoming holiday season that looms just around the corner. Our local Christmas store already has their "Christmas Land" open already. I love the holiday and all the festivities that go with it. Good job!
Patty
Comment Written 20-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2021
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Many thanks for your review...John
Comment from Wendy G
There are some positive and wise attitudes expressed here, summarised in a need for positivity, acceptance inclusion and love. In our essence, we are all the same. Interesting poem, expressing your thoughts well.
Wendy
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2021
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There are some positive and wise attitudes expressed here, summarised in a need for positivity, acceptance inclusion and love. In our essence, we are all the same. Interesting poem, expressing your thoughts well.
Wendy
Comment Written 20-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2021
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Many thanks...John
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
An encouraging write to see the positives after we have all suffered during the pandemic and I reckon this Christmas will be a joy for everyone, a fine write, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2021
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An encouraging write to see the positives after we have all suffered during the pandemic and I reckon this Christmas will be a joy for everyone, a fine write, love Dolly x
Comment Written 20-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2021
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Many thanks...John
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
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Choose wisely
by Cogitator
Beautiful presentation.
The rhymes do not seem forced. Your poem flows well. It draws on emotions and it presents strong images.
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2021
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Self-Analysis
Choose wisely
by Cogitator
Beautiful presentation.
The rhymes do not seem forced. Your poem flows well. It draws on emotions and it presents strong images.
Comment Written 20-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2021
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Many thanks...John
