Choose wisely
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Comment from Senyai
Hi Cogitator,
Oh I like this! Yes, you are spot on! Hoping 2021 can see us all give up the farce and join hands as your excellent poem advises. You summarized the past 2 1/2 years well in your lines and it would behoove us all to give it go!
Enjoyed your poem in all its word gems that flowed down the page so smoothly :))
Always,
Senyai
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2021
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Hi Cogitator,
Oh I like this! Yes, you are spot on! Hoping 2021 can see us all give up the farce and join hands as your excellent poem advises. You summarized the past 2 1/2 years well in your lines and it would behoove us all to give it go!
Enjoyed your poem in all its word gems that flowed down the page so smoothly :))
Always,
Senyai
Comment Written 22-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2021
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Much obliged...John
Comment from jenintorre
I really enjoyed reading this poem which portrays much truth. I found your rhyme scheme very interesting and original. Best wishes. Jen.
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2021
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I really enjoyed reading this poem which portrays much truth. I found your rhyme scheme very interesting and original. Best wishes. Jen.
Comment Written 22-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2021
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Much obliged...John
Comment from Kamrynn June
Wonderful piece, Cogitator! I love how you begin and end with a Christmas theme :) It is getting closer! Very clever use of words. Thank you for sharing this poem,
-K
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2021
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Wonderful piece, Cogitator! I love how you begin and end with a Christmas theme :) It is getting closer! Very clever use of words. Thank you for sharing this poem,
-K
Comment Written 22-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2021
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Much obliged...John
Comment from Hitcher
It is a well written poem with some impressive rhymes offered up. the content is relevant to the here and now. Man's ability to panic and allow darkness in when threatened is inevitable and expected unfortunately.
BUT we do normally come together in the end and move forward as one.
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2021
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It is a well written poem with some impressive rhymes offered up. the content is relevant to the here and now. Man's ability to panic and allow darkness in when threatened is inevitable and expected unfortunately.
BUT we do normally come together in the end and move forward as one.
Comment Written 21-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2021
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Much obliged...John
Comment from flylikeaneagle
Cogitator: wonderful rhymes and messages for the world
to love one another. We need to repent, return, and have a
revival of love. We can trust Jesus to blast this covid away.
Enjoy your family times together. flylikeaneagle - nancy
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2021
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Cogitator: wonderful rhymes and messages for the world
to love one another. We need to repent, return, and have a
revival of love. We can trust Jesus to blast this covid away.
Enjoy your family times together. flylikeaneagle - nancy
Comment Written 21-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2021
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Much obliged...John
Comment from Raul1
It's beautifully written. The sentences flow with clarity. A well written poem. It is interesting and unique. I like your poetry. Excellent work! Good job. Thank you for sharing!
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2021
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It's beautifully written. The sentences flow with clarity. A well written poem. It is interesting and unique. I like your poetry. Excellent work! Good job. Thank you for sharing!
Comment Written 21-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2021
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Thanks again...John
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You're welcome!
Comment from susand3022
Hi Cogitator,
I really liked this poem...it says a lot of things that we should all do!
I only have one thing to suggest, and that is the use of the word, "mother" twice in the second to last stanza. Perhaps if you changed the last line to read, " We must nurture our earth together" instead? Anyway, just a suggestion. I love the poem! Well done! :)
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2021
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Hi Cogitator,
I really liked this poem...it says a lot of things that we should all do!
I only have one thing to suggest, and that is the use of the word, "mother" twice in the second to last stanza. Perhaps if you changed the last line to read, " We must nurture our earth together" instead? Anyway, just a suggestion. I love the poem! Well done! :)
Comment Written 21-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2021
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Many thanks...Good Suggestion...John
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I changed it. Thanks again...John
Comment from lyenochka
Great exhortation for this divided world. Yes, we are the same and we must work together to stamp out hate. And leaders in Congress should model working together and "remove blindfolds." Thank you for this uplifting forward look to a better world!
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2021
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Great exhortation for this divided world. Yes, we are the same and we must work together to stamp out hate. And leaders in Congress should model working together and "remove blindfolds." Thank you for this uplifting forward look to a better world!
Comment Written 21-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2021
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Many thanks...John
Comment from pookietoo
A great rhyming job. A lot of big words too! Yes, all of us do need to choose wisely always. Keep sharing poems. Goid night. You are loved. Keep smiling.
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2021
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A great rhyming job. A lot of big words too! Yes, all of us do need to choose wisely always. Keep sharing poems. Goid night. You are loved. Keep smiling.
Comment Written 21-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2021
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Many thanks...John
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Welcome.
Comment from Giddy Nielsen-Sweep
Hi there poet, indeed this is a work to be proud of. Your rhyming words do not appear to be contrived and deliver some strong messages, especially against racism. I enjoyed reading it. Giddy
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2021
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Hi there poet, indeed this is a work to be proud of. Your rhyming words do not appear to be contrived and deliver some strong messages, especially against racism. I enjoyed reading it. Giddy
Comment Written 20-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2021
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Many tghanks...John
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I passed through Brisbane in 1983. I was on a 3300 mile tour of NSW+. Sydney, Brisbane, Toowoomba, Adelaide, Barossa Valley, Blue Mountains, Sydney. Thanks again...John
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Queensland is a great state to live in.Glad you saw it..
