Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

A lovely list of beautiful things! Celebrating love between a couple, and on their wedding and watching children play and delighting in their innocence are all beautiful!

 Comment Written 21-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 21-Sep-2021

I got 4th place in the contest.

reply by lyenochka on 21-Sep-2021

Congratulations!!

reply by the author on 21-Sep-2021

Thanks. but I wanted to do better

Comment from Mama Baer

Excellent

Lovely photo to accompany your beautiful 5-7-5. I like how you made each line rhyme. That is hard to do and very impressive! Best wishes to you in the contest!

 Comment Written 19-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 19-Sep-2021

Thanks.

Comment from RodG

Excellent

Your short poem describes three BEAUTIFUL things each of us can experience. I agree with each of your choices. You have also used rhyme effectively. Rod

 Comment Written 19-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 19-Sep-2021

Thank you.

Comment from Carlos' girl

Exceptional

This poem.is absolutely gorgeous. These things that are beautiful which you chose to write about are so classic... Youre choices are just spellbinding. This should do well in the contest

 Comment Written 19-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 19-Sep-2021

Thanks

reply by Carlos' girl on 19-Sep-2021

Youre welcome