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Here Comes The Bride

Dress rehearsal starts many years earlier.

3 total reviews 
Comment from LisaMay
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What a cutie! At that age it's all about the dress. Some of us wish we could go back to pretending to be married, rather than undergoing the relationship minefield that ensued. Dreams are safer. Playing dress up is such fun - no one gets hurt. Sorry to be a downer... it's a really sweet poem.

 Comment Written 18-Sep-2021

reply by the author on 18-Sep-2021
    Actually what you?re saying is totally true! I thought the same thing as I was putting this together LOL thank you for the review.
reply by LisaMay on 18-Sep-2021
    Isn't that sad. Life doesn't always turn out how we imagined.
Comment from lancellot
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Which one is the granddaughter? Very cute poem and very realistic for some little girls. They say wedding day is her day, so this is very understandable. The poem has the correct syllable counts. This is will a strong contender.


Good luck.

 Comment Written 18-Sep-2021

reply by the author on 18-Sep-2021
    Thank you, the little one is.
    I appreciate the review!
Comment from Janice Canerdy
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You have made excellent use of your seventeen syllables in this appealing, charming poem about a little girl's--than a big girl's--dreams. The artwork is perfect.

 Comment Written 18-Sep-2021

reply by the author on 18-Sep-2021
    Thank You Janice!