Making Peace
Carl sends the world a message of peace.3 total reviews
Comment from Elena Deas
Peace I pray for! Love those sparks of hope you speak of. Reminds you the continuous search for the beauty or treasure was always inside. Much love and blessings to you!
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2021
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Peace I pray for! Love those sparks of hope you speak of. Reminds you the continuous search for the beauty or treasure was always inside. Much love and blessings to you!
Comment Written 21-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2021
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Thank you! Blessings to you too! Thank you for the six stars!
Comment from lancellot
I think this has a good solid theme. Peace is preferred. This post also needs a rewrite to make it easier to understand. I would recommend having another set of eyes look at it or read it out loud to you. One thing I use is MS Word's text to speech.
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I did have prevented some, but not all of them.
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Everyone knows me by my name is Carl.
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The world I think is better by making peace to all.
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I still convince strangers to be friendly with everyone till this {livng} day.
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reply by the author on 17-Sep-2021
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I think this has a good solid theme. Peace is preferred. This post also needs a rewrite to make it easier to understand. I would recommend having another set of eyes look at it or read it out loud to you. One thing I use is MS Word's text to speech.
notes:
I did have prevented some, but not all of them.
- rewrite this sentence
Everyone knows me by my name is Carl.
- rewrite this sentence
The world I think is better by making peace to all.
-rewrite
I still convince strangers to be friendly with everyone till this {livng} day.
- rewrite and edit this line.
Comment Written 17-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2021
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Thank you! Thanks for your help! Please, check it. Is it now good enough for five stars?
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Yes.
Comment from pookietoo
A very nice I voted contest entry. I like how you wrote about peae and being a peacemaker. I love that you wrote this: I give friendly strangers another chance in life. I hope you have a wonderful day today.
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2021
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A very nice I voted contest entry. I like how you wrote about peae and being a peacemaker. I love that you wrote this: I give friendly strangers another chance in life. I hope you have a wonderful day today.
Comment Written 17-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2021
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Thank you!
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You are welcome.
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You are welcome.
