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Twice Fortunate

Surviving Corregidor and Baatan

3 total reviews 
Comment from dellsworthpoet
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A very intense story. The flow is good and mimics the confusion and activity. The words are simple and hit hard. The story has all components of an actual story. Beginning, conflict, resolution of problem and conclusion.

I have no suggestions.

A good read. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 16-Sep-2021

reply by the author on 16-Sep-2021
    Thank you for taking the time to read and review. Much appreciated.
reply by dellsworthpoet on 16-Sep-2021
    You are very welcome.
Comment from SHABAMO
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Great job describing some real historical events and hitting on things a Marine would remember, like who the enemy was led by. Equally great job on the imagery

Unsure if this is fiction or your POV, if fiction well written, if your actual POV, Semper Fi and thanks for sharing!

 Comment Written 16-Sep-2021

reply by the author on 16-Sep-2021
    Story is based on research plus a creative non-fiction approach. So pleased you enjoyed the story. Thanks for the review.
Comment from lancellot
Excellent
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This is a very good tale. It reads like a real life event. There are some attempt but no big out of this world Hollywood heroics. The attack came, the protagonist did his best but lost. There was no great escape, no amazing one man victory. Just war.


 Comment Written 16-Sep-2021

reply by the author on 16-Sep-2021
    Story is based on research plus a creative non-fiction approach. So pleased you enjoyed the story. Thanks for the review.