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A memorial to a brother writer

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Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
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I did not have the pleasure of knowing August or his work, but tribute poems always move me. This one especially is a moving poem, filled with beautiful sentiments. You astound me by the time you find to read everyone's contributions to the wonderful community tht is FanStory.

 Comment Written 17-Sep-2021


reply by the author on 17-Sep-2021
    I am basically homebound, except for medical tests and appointments. I find great joy in reading as many offerings as I can. I had not read anything of August's...but when I heard of his passing I went to read him. Our words outlive us. His family, his daughter Amber, can be very proud of him! You honor his memory with this six. Thank you! Karenina
reply by Katherine M. (k-11) on 17-Sep-2021
    You are frequently in my thoughts dear friend, as I wish you a full recovery.
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2021
    Thank you, as you are in mine!--

    Karenina
Comment from bob cullen
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What a beautiful tribute to someone you knew only through Fanstory. What a great and rewarding site this is. And what interesting people we meet. I really believe this is Fanstory's greatest achievement. Thank you Tom.

 Comment Written 16-Sep-2021


reply by the author on 17-Sep-2021
    Thank you! I only wish I was able to express my appreciation for August's work before he passed. FanStory truly is a family we choose!
    Karenina
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
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Kudos to you for this stunning tribute poem--I am astounded that you read ALL (how many?) his work before writing this magnificent paean. I'll check him out.

 Comment Written 16-Sep-2021


reply by the author on 17-Sep-2021
    How many? Not nearly enough! Gone too soon...at fifty-seven! I am certain you will be the impressed!
    Thank you! Karenina




Comment from l.raven
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Hi Karenina, sooooo very beautiful my sweet friend...
I know I am blessed to have had the chance to know August...
he was a kind man...and humble to all who knew him...
he truly had a talent to write...and I wish more on here would of read his poetry...

this is an amazing poem sweet girl...and I love your stunning picture...very nicely written...I know Amber will love it...God Bless...love you...Linda xxoo

 Comment Written 16-Sep-2021


reply by the author on 17-Sep-2021
    I am praying for Amber... I am blessed to be directed to August's work, and was honored to offer a tribute to him. Thank you!
    Karenina
reply by l.raven on 17-Sep-2021
    Thank You....

    and you are soooo very welcome...love xxoo
Comment from pookietoo
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Very nice poem. Keep up with the poem writing and sharing your poems. Good luck to you always and best wishes. Keep smiling. I enjoyed reading this poem.

 Comment Written 16-Sep-2021


reply by the author on 17-Sep-2021
    Thanks for reading! Say a prayer for August....and for all who grieve him!

    Karenina
reply by pookietoo on 17-Sep-2021
    Ok
Comment from Theodore McDowell
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Hey, very nice tribute for a man I didn't know. I liked his words in the notes section of the post. Hope all is well with you also, K. Keep me updated, but it's encouraging that you posted.

 Comment Written 16-Sep-2021


reply by the author on 17-Sep-2021
    Hey. Never knew him...check out his work. Mostly free verse and all powerful! I never got to read him before he passed. This tribute is n appreciation for his words that live on, and for his daighter, Amber.
    Thanks, Karenina
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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You did a great job with your tribute, Karenina. I enjoyed reading your sweet, well-written poem. Your words are well chosen, the rhymes work great, and your message is clear.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan

 Comment Written 16-Sep-2021


reply by the author on 17-Sep-2021
    My pleasure to pay tribute to August, who I was not fortunate enough to have known before he passed.
    Thank you Jan.

    Karenina
Comment from Pam (respa)
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-I knew I was saving my
last six star for a reason.
-This one is dedicated
to your poem and to
the memory of August.
-I did not know him well,
but he seemed like a very
kind and caring person.
-You have no idea how much
it touched my heart that you
read all of his poems before writing this.
-The image and poem are beautiful, Karenina.
-I can't pick out a favorite line because
they all go together to express feelings
of loss for his daughter, family, and
for us on FanStory.
-He will be missed, but I know he
would appreciate this poem.
-Thank you for sharing it, special friend.

 Comment Written 16-Sep-2021


reply by the author on 17-Sep-2021
    I was floored by his work...it swallowed me whole! I began in 2013 when he joined and just kept reading... My heart breaks for his daughter, Amber...I pray she finds solace in how, even now, her father is moving hearts and minds!
    You honor August with this six, my friend! Thank you.

    Karenina
reply by Pam (respa) on 17-Sep-2021
    You are very welcome and deserving, Karenina, as well as August. I forget who mentioned it, but Amber would like to make a book of her father's work. I wish I had gotten to know him more, but he didn't post all that often, and he occasionally reviewed my work, but even with that, I got a sense of his kindness.
Comment from Jay Squires
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Karenina ... Lovely Karenina... your poem is itself a blessing to those of us who love you. Just to know your mind is still ablaze with passion for the word! That you would spend your recuperating energies to praise the work of someone you didn't even know, but have read his poetry, says so much about your soul. The poem you wrote is the best I've read from the writers here who knew August.

Hurry back to us, Karenina!

 Comment Written 16-Sep-2021


reply by the author on 17-Sep-2021
    Now you have me in tears! So very kind of you my friend! I heard of his passing and was drawn in by his writing. Every writer hopes his words will live on. August's truly do! It was an honor to pay tribute to him. All my best to you, Jay!
    I am doing my best to be fully back! Many thanks
    Karenina

Comment from Paul McFarland
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Great tribute. It's amazing how many of you people became close to this man, without ever meeting him in person. I am finding out what this poetry site can do.

 Comment Written 16-Sep-2021


reply by the author on 17-Sep-2021
    May you be blessed with the kindred spirit respect of all fellow FanStory members! Not only had I never met him in person...I had not come upon his writing before his passing! Check out his work! You will come away knowing our words live forever!
    Thank you, Karenina