Comment from chatterbox1

Excellent

What fun! Makes me want to go back to the zoo like I used to. My grampa took me often to the Seattle zoo where we'd spend the whole day talking to animals. Our imaginary conversations with the monkeys are some of my fondest memories of my best friend.

 Comment Written 21-Sep-2021

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Comment from joycetreasures

Excellent

Pookietoo,

I love reading your children's poem, "Fun at the Zoo." Any child would enjoy this one, I did. I love the Zoo environment with all the unique and unusual animals. Your rhyming is beautifully added to make the poem flow nicely.
Good luck in the contest. You have an excellent change with this one. Well done:-)

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 Comment Written 16-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 16-Sep-2021

Thanks.

reply by joycetreasures on 16-Sep-2021

You are welcome.

Comment from Lana Marie

Excellent

That's a cute little story for the children's poetry contest, I love animals I'm going to the zoo.
The only thing I would say is that on the very last line where you say "many different cars are found at the zoo", I don't know if you meant to say cats? Because everything had to do with animals except for the cars. Good luck in the contest.

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 Comment Written 16-Sep-2021

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Comment from NABattaglia

Exceptional

Fun at the Zoo? How about fun reading this! Loved it. Really great. I will read this to my 4-month-old baby tonight. Thank you for sharing and this is really a fun piece that is great for a baby before bed.

 Comment Written 16-Sep-2021

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