Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

Your poem is filled with all creatures that children love to see and enjoy and I enjoyed your rhyming words to bring these zoo animals to life. The sights and sounds of the zoo to delight our eyes and ears here, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 22-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 22-Sep-2021

Thanks, not doing well in the contest.

Comment from Midi O'Rourke

Excellent

Lovely children's poem. It reads very well and is, what I would call, a feel good poem. It reflects a child's innocence. No worries and a carefree trip to the zoo.

 Comment Written 22-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 22-Sep-2021

Thanks, not doing well in the contest.

Comment from nomi338

Excellent

Some people claim that the monkey and man or related. If that is so it is as remote as a rose being related to the cactus, or a bear being related to a rabbit. We were all created by the same creative force, but according we were created according to our kind. So, no, we will never see an elephant that is part monkey, or an eagle that is part alligator. We are all unique as species and that is what makes us so special. Let us all celebrate our uniqueness.

 Comment Written 22-Sep-2021

Comment from Sherry Asbury

Excellent

Great zoo story - I love it and am sure kids will love it - you are in tune with how children think and some of us big kids too! Just imagine with pictures - wow!

 Comment Written 22-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 22-Sep-2021

Thank you.

Comment from amahra

Excellent

First of all, I loved the artwork which was very playful and colorful. I thought the poem was written very well...great word choice and fine rhyme scheme. Great child-like rhythm. Good job.

 Comment Written 21-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 21-Sep-2021

Thanks.

Comment from duchessofdrumborg

Excellent

"Fun At The Zoo", is an extremely well-written and delightfully descriptive piece. It was a privilege to both read and review this talented poet's work. I look forward to seeing your next post.

 Comment Written 21-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 21-Sep-2021

Thanks

reply by duchessofdrumborg on 22-Sep-2021

Your very welcome.

reply by the author on 22-Sep-2021

:)

reply by duchessofdrumborg on 22-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 22-Sep-2021

:)

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

What a fun poem for children, Pookie. I enjoyed reading it. Your lines read smoothly with good rhymes and create great imagery. I believe children will adore reading/hearing this as most will identify with the animals they know. Your descriptions add to the fun.
Best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan

 Comment Written 21-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 21-Sep-2021

Thanks

Comment from flylikeaneagle

Exceptional

Pookietoo: wonderful child's poem for a storybook. I can
see someone illustrate this for children to read or sit on
grandma's lap. Have fun reading this to your family too.
************** flylikeaneagle - nancy

 Comment Written 21-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 21-Sep-2021

Thanks.

Comment from SHABAMO

Excellent

A great entry for the children's rhyme contest! It was fun to read, the giraffe image went well with the first stanza, and I saw no major issues. Nice work

 Comment Written 21-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 21-Sep-2021

Thanks.

Comment from Mary Shifman

Excellent

This is a charming children's poem. I'm sure they would enjoy hearing it and perhaps making the animal sounds as the poem progresses. It could be a fun activity. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 21-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 21-Sep-2021

Thank you.

reply by the author on 21-Sep-2021

Thank you.