Comment from Gert sherwood

Excellent

Fun At The Zoo
pookietoo your children's poem about the animals in the zoo
was fun to read. It brought back fun times when I went to the zoo.
Gert

 Comment Written 23-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 24-Sep-2021

Thanks, it didn't do well in the contest. :(

Comment from LJbutterfly

Excellent

You've done a fine job of covering many zoo animals. If this were a children's book with pictures of each animal mentioned, it would delight any child. You did a good job with rhyming. Best wishes in the contest.

 Comment Written 23-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 23-Sep-2021

Thanks, not doing well in the contest.

Comment from roof35

Excellent

This is an excellent entry for the Children's Poetry Contest. I know my grandson would enjoy reading this poem. Your illustration matches perfectly with your words. Nicely done.

 Comment Written 23-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 23-Sep-2021

Thanks, not doing well in the contest.

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very well written poem about fun at the zoo. You used very good descriptive words and very nice imagery with the picture of the beautiful giraffes. Thank you for sharing! love and blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 23-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 23-Sep-2021

Thanks, not doing well in the contest.

Comment from Senyai

Excellent

Hi Pookietoo,

Ahh, this is scrumptious poetry! So cute with a fitting rhyme scheme and beat for a children's poem. I love the menagerie of animals you listed at this zoo from giraffes to geese.

Good luck with your entry. I know it will do well.

Have a wonderful day:))
Senyai

 Comment Written 23-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 23-Sep-2021

Thanks, not doing well in the contest.

Comment from Jasmine Girl

Excellent

I really enjoy reading your poem for Children's Poetry Entry. Rhyming is definitely helpful for kids to enjoy. I like your mentioning so many delightful animals in the zoo.

Well done.

 Comment Written 23-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 23-Sep-2021

Thanks, not doing well in the contest.

Comment from Seshadri_Sreenivasan

Excellent

What wonderful imagery you have created! I feel as though I am taking a stroll around the Zoo. This is a great poem for all age groups I think. It's a 'feel-good' poem and deserves first place in the contest. Thank you for sharing! Good luck!

 Comment Written 23-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 23-Sep-2021

Thanks, it is not doing well in the contest.

Comment from mermaids

Excellent

I love be poems about the zoo. I have written a few myself. Love how you mention various animals and your reaction to them. This is a fun poem that I am sure children will enjoy.

 Comment Written 23-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 23-Sep-2021

Thanks, it is not doing well in the contest.

Comment from Giddy Nielsen-Sweep

Excellent

This is a great children's poem including all these animals. I can just picture mothers reading to their children as you and I did to ours. I enjoyed it thanks so much for writing it, Giddy

 Comment Written 23-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 23-Sep-2021

Doing bad in the contest.

Comment from karenina

Excellent

I know my seven year old grandson loves going to the zoo....and this poem will capture his imagination when he comes to visit tomorrow! Is dormous an alternate spelling? I could only find dormouse...with the silent "e" at the end...

Fine children's poem!

Karenina

 Comment Written 23-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 23-Sep-2021

Doing bad in the contest

reply by karenina on 23-Sep-2021

No measure of the delight of your poem.

Karenina

reply by the author on 23-Sep-2021

:)