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Tribute to Crzypntr.

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A memorial to a brother writer

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Comment from Paul McFarland
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Another great tribute to one of Fanstory's favorite sons. It's amazing how many have written tributes. Your last two lines in your poem are outstanding.

 Comment Written 17-Sep-2021


reply by the author on 22-Sep-2021
    Thank you, Paul. It's good that one's writings can allow us to meet people even after they've gone to Heaven.
    Blessings!
Comment from Bill Schott
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This minute poem, Celebrating August's Quill, has the proper formatting and reminds us that the beauty we create here will be there as well. Hoping for a long hello for crzypntr.

 Comment Written 17-Sep-2021


reply by the author on 22-Sep-2021
    Thank you, Bill. Good to know that our writing continues after us.
    Blessings!
Comment from kahpot
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What a beautiful poem and tribute to a sadly passed FS. member, "with heavens quill he's writing still" yes we can continue to read and enjoy, very well written****kahpot

 Comment Written 17-Sep-2021


reply by the author on 22-Sep-2021
    Thank you, Kahpot. Makes me wonder if I should be one of those premier shield authors...It's good we can keep reading each other! Blessings!
Comment from Irish Rain
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I just love this. What a simply beautiful tribute to August. And so very true, death is certainly not the end. You've written a lovely poem Miss Helen, blessings...

 Comment Written 17-Sep-2021


reply by the author on 22-Sep-2021
    Thank you so much, Miss Judy! Sorry for the late reply. Hope you are celebrating Autumn. I imagine you decorating the house with autumn festivities!
    Hugs!
reply by Irish Rain on 22-Sep-2021
    Beautiful RAINY....(my favorite!) autumn day here! I love it!!
Comment from Sally Law
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I was just getting to know him a little when he disappeared. He was very kind and generous to me though. I will look forward to catching up with him in heaven. A beautiful tribute for August, dear Helen,
Sal XOs

 Comment Written 17-Sep-2021


reply by the author on 17-Sep-2021
    Thank you, Sal! So glad you got to know him before his call to heaven. Hugs!
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
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This is a beautiful poem. So eloquent and delicate. August was extremely lucky to have friends like you. Thank you for letting us all into your innermost thoughts.

 Comment Written 17-Sep-2021


reply by the author on 22-Sep-2021
    Thank you, Kate! I already replied in my message but I'm only getting the review replies now. Appreciate your wonderful comments Hugs!
Comment from Theodore McDowell
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Nice tribute to a man who seemed to be much loved on FS. He appears to have been on the site for a very long time. I appreciate the tribute!!!!!!!!!!!!

 Comment Written 16-Sep-2021


reply by the author on 16-Sep-2021
    Good to see you back! Thanks for reviewing. I only got to know him because of this tribute book.
    Hope all is well with you and yours!
    Blessings!
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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You did a great job with your minute poem tribute to August. I enjoyed reading it, Helen. Great job with the minute style. Your words are well chosen, there's good, smooth flow, and you create great imagery. I like the positive way you ended your poem--yes, he is writing still.
Respectfully, Jan

 Comment Written 16-Sep-2021


reply by the author on 16-Sep-2021
    Thank you, Jan. I enjoyed reading your poem for him! Hugs!
Comment from Teri7
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Helen, This is a very nice and very well written Tribute to Crzypntr. I did not know him well at all. You used very good descriptive words. Maybe I need to read some of his work too. Thanks for the great idea. love and blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 16-Sep-2021


reply by the author on 16-Sep-2021
    Thank you so much, Teri. I am glad I learned about him through the other writers her.
    Hugs!
Comment from judiverse
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I didn't know of August's work, either. I've read some of the comments about him, and they are very impressive. Your minute format works beautifully for you. Comforting words that death is not the end and August will still be writing in heaven. Beautifully presented. judi

 Comment Written 16-Sep-2021


reply by the author on 16-Sep-2021
    Thank you so much, Judi. It's nice that we can keep "meeting" people even after they've gone to Heaven by reading their words.
    Hugs!