Comment from Yardier

Excellent

Tragic but brilliant. Bumpy but clear. Challenging confusion. A heart faraway but so near from someone in heaven to someone over yonder hill. Joy, grief, loss, gain.
Well done.

 Comment Written 16-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 19-Sep-2021

Thanks poet for your time and also for your interpretations and reply when it comes to this subject.
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Comment from SHABAMO

Excellent

A wonderful if very sad way to commemorate the life of Jason. I am very sorry this happened to him but you honor him by sharing his fathers poem and remembering the three others he helped live.

 Comment Written 16-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 16-Sep-2021

Thanks it was actually Four including Bill who received Jason's right kidney.
Bill is still alive along with Chaz who got the heart and one.
An unknown South Jersey female got the left kidney she still surviving.
The man from Philadelphia who was African-American lived 8 years with Jason's liver.
Thanks for sharing again in your review.
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Comment from Eunice Amero

Excellent

Good poem but sad. It's bad for anyone to becaome brain dead. Life can be so hard at times. But remember the LOrd went through so much for us and He is coming back soon. Thank you for sharing. The more you write the better you become.

 Comment Written 16-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 16-Sep-2021

Thanks Eunice I like it for your review and your religious comments.
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reply by Eunice Amero on 16-Sep-2021

You are more than welcome.

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

I enjoyed reading this very interesting and very well worded poem you have penned about that day. I am so sorry it had to happen, but because of it so many got a second chance at life. Thank you for always sharing my friend. May God bless you! Teri

 Comment Written 16-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 16-Sep-2021

Thanks Teri.
I have made quite a lot of friends here on this writing site just from exactly what I just posted.
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reply by Teri7 on 16-Sep-2021

That is a good thing my friend! I hope you have a blessed rest of the week and great weekend!

Comment from Patty Palmer

Excellent

I enjoyed your poem. I like the rhyme and rhythm. The words were catchy and phrased well. Thanks for sharing your poem and for reminding people that there is sadness in death, yes, but there is a future in tissue and organ donation that give others the chance to continue to live.
God bless!
Patty

 Comment Written 16-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 16-Sep-2021

Thanks Patty
"Stepping Out of Line"
Tells the story.
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