Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This kyrielle, His Spirit Soared, has the proper formatting and acknowledges that one of God's saints, whose time on earth was a blessing, has taken his music to a higher plane. Nice.

 Comment Written 17-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 17-Sep-2021

Thank you for your great review and comments.
Respectfully, Jan

Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)

Exceptional

This is a wonderful tribute that you have written to a man who today I am coming to wish I had known. He seems worthy of his place beyond the pearly gates, and at the same time he will live on here through his writing.

 Comment Written 17-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 17-Sep-2021

Thank you, Katherine, for your exceptional 6 star rating and great comments.
Much appreciative of both.
Respectfully, Jan

Comment from Paul McFarland

Excellent

A very touching tribute to your fellow poet. A new poetic form for me in this one. I'm giving you five stars for this, and I'm giving six stars to the Amazing Grace performance.

 Comment Written 16-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 17-Sep-2021

Thank you for taking time to read, review, and comment on my presentation.
Respectfully, Jan

Comment from judiverse

Excellent

This is a lovely tribute. The artwork is beautiful. I didn't know the work of crzypntr, but from the tributes I've read about him, his poems and his life were inspirational. I like your imagery of him reciting his thoughts in poems on Heaven's stage. judi

 Comment Written 16-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 17-Sep-2021

Most appreciative, Judi, of yuor gr4eat review and comments.
Thank you.
Respectfully, Jan

Comment from Pearl Edwards

Excellent

This is a lovely tribute kyrielle Jan to Crzypntr. I don't know his words, but have read the tributes.
His words live on, they'll never age
as writers that is what we all hope for. Nicely written memorial poem Jan.

 Comment Written 16-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 17-Sep-2021

Thank you, Pearl, for dropping by with a great review.
Respectfully, Jan

Comment from pharp

Excellent

Jan,

You have penned a fine tribute to one of our very down.

I have never had the pleasure of knowing this fine poet, but Roy has shared some fine qualities of this young man. Thanks so much for sharing your beautiful poem. My prayers, sincere and deepest sympathy are with his family and friends.

God bless you!

Hugs...Portia

 Comment Written 16-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 17-Sep-2021

Thank you, Portia, for dropping by to read and review my presentation.
Much appreciated.
Respectfully, Jan

Comment from Sherry Asbury

Excellent

Virtual 6 - as mine are gone. This song always stirs my soul, and this is so very beautiful. I do not know to whom you were writing this, but I am dedicating it to Dean Kuch, my hero. I did not know August, but I bet they are up there in the green fields writing their best. Thank you for this love tribute!Q!

 Comment Written 16-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 17-Sep-2021

Thank you, sherry, for your great review and comments. Both mean much to me.
Respectfully, Jan

Comment from l.raven

Excellent

Hi Jan, this is just beautiful sweet girl...
he was a kind and humble man...a heart of gold...
and a very talented writer...he will be so missed
here in our FanStory family...

he is now Resting In Peace...walking with God...
and yes...he is now writing in amazing company with all our
fallen Conrad's...God Bless his soul...

I love your poem...and love the picture...so very nicely written...and you are right...this is one of the best videos I have ever heard of Amazing grace...love you...Linda xxoo

 Comment Written 16-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 17-Sep-2021

Thank you for your great review and comments, Linda. Both much appreciated.
Respectfully, Jan

reply by l.raven on 17-Sep-2021

your so very welcome...love xxoo

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

I was not familiar with this FanStorian but from the tributes I've read, I know it is my loss. Thank you for sharing this with us and I will pray for his family and friends.

 Comment Written 16-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 17-Sep-2021

Thnk you, Barbara, for taking time to read and review my presentation.
Respectfully, Jan

Comment from robyn corum

Excellent

Jan,

Wow! How beautiful! I am sure this poem will help bring comfort to August's family. The words are tender and kind and so lovely. You certainly have a talent with the written word.

Thank you.

 Comment Written 16-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 17-Sep-2021

Thank you, Robyn, for dropping by with a great review.
Means much to me.
Respectfully, Jan