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Running Blind

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The Blind Girl's toughest cold case.

28 total reviews 
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
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This case has been rather hard on the agents. Jackson has done a good deal towards saving Ken Washburn's life, but he is a little upset with the way things are going. There is a lot of guarding going on.

Ralf

 Comment Written 26-Sep-2021


reply by the author on 27-Sep-2021
    Thank you for the lovely review and for catching up! It means so much. Blessings always,
    Sal XOs...
Comment from Begin Again
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How terrific! first you jolt the senses with the morning alert for all and then you tease their senses with delicious food... and last but definitely not least, you sprinkle everything with love... what a sweet touch with Jackson and the Blind Girl. Awesome!

Hugs, Carol

 Comment Written 24-Sep-2021


reply by the author on 24-Sep-2021
    Thank you so much for the wonderful review of my book chapter. It is most appreciated. I knew you would like the food as most good cooks do. I love scene, well of course you do. ;))
    Sending along my very best, Sally XOs
Comment from Janetsue
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Not only did I enjoy another outstanding chapter, I also learned a new word: flagitious. It even sounds as nasty as it means although I am having a bit of trouble actually pronouncing it myself - fla·gi·tious (flÉ?Ë?jiSHÉ?s) It does not exactly slide off the tongue very easily. That hardly matters though, since I am not a detective, I probably will never have a chance to say it in a conversation. lol

 Comment Written 23-Sep-2021


reply by the author on 24-Sep-2021
    Thank you very much for the wonderful review and generous six star rating. I am always so blessed by this. I?m so glad you?re enjoying my book. Everyone seem to be surprised by this word. I?m an avid Scrabble player and love to learn new words every day. I thought I?d try a new one for this chapter. I?m so glad you enjoyed it. Once again, I thank you so much!

    Blessings for your week, dear Janet,
    Sal XOs
    I need your birthday?. Year is insignificant. ;)
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
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I have read this three times and then been disturbed and taken away from my laptop. I refuse to let anyone interfere this time. I loved this part. The love Jackson has for Sal is so, so lovely! Having that in with this crime novel makes it so real. I have never had corn cakes, it's not an English type breakfast, so you'll have to give me the recipe, they sound scrummy!! I really enjoyed this part, my friend. I am not giving any sixes out next time until you post!! :)) Sandra xxx

 Comment Written 23-Sep-2021


reply by the author on 23-Sep-2021
    Thank you, sweet Sandra. I?m so glad you enjoyed this chapter. I?ve included my real life love story in this one. My husband, Jack, is much like the character here. He?s turned down many career opportunities that would take him away from me. We are very devoted to one another. Sending you my best today as always,
    Sal XOs
Comment from Gloria ....
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Guilty as charged, and the penalty of southern-style pancakes with extra maple syrup proves they got the breakfast menu thrown at them. A fun intro that I quite enjoyed, Sally. Food is something integral to a satisfying novel in my opinion.

Truly enjoyed the vivid description of Black Bayou Creek too. Just enough to show the scene.

A superb chapter, and a fine cliff-hanger clue too.

Great job with this, Sally. :))

Gloria


 Comment Written 22-Sep-2021


reply by the author on 24-Sep-2021
    Thank you for the lovely review and super sixer, dear Gloria. I so glad you enjoyed it, food and all. Where I live is quite swampy, a natural preserve here in Florida, so I?m always inspired.
    Sending you my best today as always,
    Sal XOs
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
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Love your writing. It just about makes me believe you are a detective in real life. Where do you get your ideas for your stories? Do you research the matters quite thoroughly?

 Comment Written 22-Sep-2021


reply by the author on 23-Sep-2021
    Aw, thank you so much. I aspired to work for the FBI in fingerprint forensics. My mother said no to my career plans. I live out my fantasy in this book. Dr. Marie MacLavish is my alter ego so to speak. Sending you my best today as always,
    Sally XOs
Comment from Bill Schott
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I like the from the shoulder honesty in all your characters as it calms me to know everthing they say is gospel. This last piece with slipping questions and answers between Ken and Jackson makes me wonder about the nurse, or, simply a precaution since Analiese is in hiding.

 Comment Written 22-Sep-2021


reply by the author on 23-Sep-2021
    Thank you for the wonderful review and generous stars. Both mean so much to me. Sending you and yours my best, and blessings always,
    Sal :)) XOs
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
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Interesting information going on here. Your method of denoting speakers is also interesting. Your writing is easy to read and moves along smoothly, or did until I ran into "flagitious crimes". Is this Southern speak or a $10 word? I do enjoy your Sally Law stories.

 Comment Written 22-Sep-2021


reply by the author on 23-Sep-2021
    Thank you for the excellent review and insightful comments. Both are so appreciated. Sending you my best today as always,
    Sally :))
Comment from country ranch writer
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Hope dear sally is on the mend so she can get back to business helping her hubby catch and punish the bad guys. How is taking Sally being in the hospital?
Sounds like dispute everything he is still on the job .

 Comment Written 22-Sep-2021


reply by the author on 23-Sep-2021
    Thank you for the lovely review and insightful comments. Blessings always,
    Sal XOs
reply by country ranch writer on 23-Sep-2021
    🍀 stay safe have a good day
reply by country ranch writer on 23-Sep-2021
    🍀 stay safe have a good day
reply by country ranch writer on 23-Sep-2021
    🍀 stay safe have a good day
Comment from Ulla
Exceptional
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Hi Sally, to my delight I didn't miscalculate, so here goes my last six, and it's so well deserved. This is a great chapter, and so very well written. The interaction among the characters is wonderful. You do that so very well. Ulla xxx

 Comment Written 21-Sep-2021


reply by the author on 23-Sep-2021
    Thank you for the stellar review and star blast, dearest Ulla. Both mean so much. I?m always so glad to see you and read your encouraging reviews. Blessings always,
    Sal XOs