Life of Something Bee-Utiful
Life of ...8 total reviews
Comment from Bonnie Seach
Attractive art work and color scheme.
Good formatting.
The rhyme and rhythm could benefit from a bit more syncopation.
Thank you for sharing
Best wishes for the contest
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2021
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Attractive art work and color scheme.
Good formatting.
The rhyme and rhythm could benefit from a bit more syncopation.
Thank you for sharing
Best wishes for the contest
Comment Written 16-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2021
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Thanks for your review. I made a few changes.
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Excellent! 👍🏻👏👌😊🌹
Comment from pookietoo
A very nice poem on the life of a bee. Good luck to you in the contest. I hope you continue to write poems like this. This is beautiful. Best wishes and keep smiling.
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2021
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A very nice poem on the life of a bee. Good luck to you in the contest. I hope you continue to write poems like this. This is beautiful. Best wishes and keep smiling.
Comment Written 15-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2021
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Thanks very much for your review.
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You are welcome. I would appreciate it if you would review my Jessica's Year of Seeing Nature story
Comment from Mary Shifman
This is a nice rhyming poem with a clever little hero. Bees are amazing creatures. We don't see many honeybees around where we live anymore. We have several acres and we don't spray, but we only have yellow jackets, a few bumblebees and and those that make little clay chambers in window corners that we call mud-dobbers. It's a sad state of things. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2021
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This is a nice rhyming poem with a clever little hero. Bees are amazing creatures. We don't see many honeybees around where we live anymore. We have several acres and we don't spray, but we only have yellow jackets, a few bumblebees and and those that make little clay chambers in window corners that we call mud-dobbers. It's a sad state of things. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 14-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2021
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Thanks for your review. I had never heard of yellow jackets until I moved to the US and got stung by a couple.
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You are welcome. Yes, yellow jackets are nasty. Unlike honeybees, they can just keep on stinging!
Comment from sandy adams
How sweet. That was just adorable. The content flowed nicely as you poured your words upon the page. I've looked and I've wandered from poet to poem, and am really glad I landed on this beautifully written find. I'll be searching for more. Peace be with You.
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2021
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How sweet. That was just adorable. The content flowed nicely as you poured your words upon the page. I've looked and I've wandered from poet to poem, and am really glad I landed on this beautifully written find. I'll be searching for more. Peace be with You.
Comment Written 14-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2021
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Thanks for a very positive review.
Comment from AliMom
This is sweet (no pun intended). The picture above it is perfect. The bee warns us of his purpose and identity reminding us that while industrious, he is also fragile. You may get stung but you will win in the outcome because you will survive.
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2021
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This is sweet (no pun intended). The picture above it is perfect. The bee warns us of his purpose and identity reminding us that while industrious, he is also fragile. You may get stung but you will win in the outcome because you will survive.
Comment Written 14-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2021
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Thanks for your review.
Comment from Eunice Amero
This is so sweet. I love it. You made that bee come alive. He's a hard worker giving us what we need. I hate to see anyone kill them. We need them. Thank you for sharing this sweet poem.
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2021
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This is so sweet. I love it. You made that bee come alive. He's a hard worker giving us what we need. I hate to see anyone kill them. We need them. Thank you for sharing this sweet poem.
Comment Written 14-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2021
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Thanks for your review.
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You're welcome
Comment from kiwisteveh
Cute little poem in rhyming quatrains that follows the life cycle (sort of) of that most useful of creatures, the bee. I think it has been pointed out often enough that without bees, life on earth would grind to a halt, so your friendly bee is well worth celebrating.
Good luck in the contest, you PBnJphobe!
Steve
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2021
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Cute little poem in rhyming quatrains that follows the life cycle (sort of) of that most useful of creatures, the bee. I think it has been pointed out often enough that without bees, life on earth would grind to a halt, so your friendly bee is well worth celebrating.
Good luck in the contest, you PBnJphobe!
Steve
Comment Written 14-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2021
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Thanks for your review Steve. I have never understood the American fascination for PBnJ.
Comment from zanya
Yes the life of our bees is increasingly precious since they are disappearing from our planet Earth - so many species going the same way- a poetic reminder here of just how important these winged creatures are to our existence
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2021
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Yes the life of our bees is increasingly precious since they are disappearing from our planet Earth - so many species going the same way- a poetic reminder here of just how important these winged creatures are to our existence
Comment Written 14-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2021
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Thanks very much for your review.