Life's Like A Burning Candle
Love everlasting56 total reviews
Comment from Mary Shifman
This is a lovely and poignant poem. It has rhyme and a flowing rhythm. I really like the imagery you used as well. I particularly liked the phrase, 'But when you came into my life, then my candle flamed anew.' This a beautiful tribute to your wife. Well done.
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This is a lovely and poignant poem. It has rhyme and a flowing rhythm. I really like the imagery you used as well. I particularly liked the phrase, 'But when you came into my life, then my candle flamed anew.' This a beautiful tribute to your wife. Well done.
Comment Written 14-Sep-2021
Comment from Raul1
I have enjoyed reading your piece of poetry. It's beautifully written. I like how you structured this poem. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Thank you for sharing!
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I have enjoyed reading your piece of poetry. It's beautifully written. I like how you structured this poem. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Thank you for sharing!
Comment Written 14-Sep-2021
Comment from Sherry Asbury
Trust me, dear man - she is waiting for you and a whole new togetherness is waiting...this one eternal and precious. You write of her as if she is an angel, and I am sure she is. Such love and loyalty are beautiful to behold.
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Trust me, dear man - she is waiting for you and a whole new togetherness is waiting...this one eternal and precious. You write of her as if she is an angel, and I am sure she is. Such love and loyalty are beautiful to behold.
Comment Written 14-Sep-2021
Comment from joycetreasures
Jaybird,
What a beautiful heartfelt poem to your wife? Your rhyming is a very nicely flow. I concur, with you topic that Life's like a burning candle. For all of us, the candle will slowly burn out. This is a lovely poem Jay.
Well done. Happy writing:-)
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Jaybird,
What a beautiful heartfelt poem to your wife? Your rhyming is a very nicely flow. I concur, with you topic that Life's like a burning candle. For all of us, the candle will slowly burn out. This is a lovely poem Jay.
Well done. Happy writing:-)
Comment Written 14-Sep-2021
Comment from royowen
Oh yes indeed, life is pretty fickle, we have no idea how long our sojourn on earth is for, and we have to make the most of it while we can, fortunately my partner in this journey is still with me. Beautifully written, as always my friend, blessings Roy
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Oh yes indeed, life is pretty fickle, we have no idea how long our sojourn on earth is for, and we have to make the most of it while we can, fortunately my partner in this journey is still with me. Beautifully written, as always my friend, blessings Roy
Typo :to life(')s show.
Comment Written 14-Sep-2021
Comment from Mary Vigasin
Another beautiful poem Jaybird. I am sure that one day you will be United with your love.
You keep her close to your heart and in your loving words.
Best regards
Mary
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Another beautiful poem Jaybird. I am sure that one day you will be United with your love.
You keep her close to your heart and in your loving words.
Best regards
Mary
Comment Written 14-Sep-2021
Comment from dragonpoet
This is a well rhymed abcb poem about your love for your wife. Writing is always a good outlet for grief. I like the artwork and the idea of joining your flames.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
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This is a well rhymed abcb poem about your love for your wife. Writing is always a good outlet for grief. I like the artwork and the idea of joining your flames.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
Comment Written 14-Sep-2021
Comment from lyenochka
Thank you, Jaybird, for another wonderful poem, remembering the flame of your love for your dear wife. Great job with your rhyming poem!
adding beauty to lifes show. (life's)
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Thank you, Jaybird, for another wonderful poem, remembering the flame of your love for your dear wife. Great job with your rhyming poem!
adding beauty to lifes show. (life's)
Comment Written 14-Sep-2021
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
This is a beautifully written poem for your loved one. Your love for her is quite evident in all of your beautiful tributes. I enjoy your writing. Very well done.
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This is a beautifully written poem for your loved one. Your love for her is quite evident in all of your beautiful tributes. I enjoy your writing. Very well done.
Comment Written 14-Sep-2021
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I am positive in Heaven you will be reunited with your lovely wife. I can't believe any different. Thank you for sharing your wife with us in a poem. I enjoyed reading this well written poem.
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I am positive in Heaven you will be reunited with your lovely wife. I can't believe any different. Thank you for sharing your wife with us in a poem. I enjoyed reading this well written poem.
Comment Written 14-Sep-2021
