Comment from Pantygynt

Excellent

This is a lovely tribute to a love that caused your candle to 'flame anew'. I am sure she will be there waiting patiently for you when the time comes.

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Comment from Cogitator

Excellent

But, when you came into my life,
then my candle flamed anew.
Joining in to our relationship,
was the thing I had to do.

I am saying this to Gracie....Jon

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Comment from Patty Palmer

Excellent

A nice poem of love and life. Sad, when we have someone that we love and trust that time eventually runs out on us. But, thank God for the memories that we make during our lives together that we can pull out and visit a special time that we shared and we can reflect on it and enjoy it all over again!
Patty

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Comment from Wendy G

Excellent

I love the way you honour your wife and often express your love for her in gentle beautiful verse. You lived together with "harmony, peace and bliss.". What a wonderful gift for each other.
Wendy

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Comment from Seshadri_Sreenivasan

Excellent

A candle holds great significance in various facets of human life be and dispels darkness by ushering in illumination.A candle has a role to play in every occasion, be it birth, marriage, or death as it represents divine guidance. By allowing one to see clearly even in most adverse circumstances, the candle can both defy and defeat inherent fears that one faces.I enjoyed your poem. Thanks for sharing!

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Comment from pookietoo

Excellent

A wonderful love poem with nice rhyming job every other line. It is neat you write poems at your age. Keep up the wonderful work writing your poems. Good luck to you and best wishes.

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Comment from Senyai

Excellent

Hi Jay,

This is a lovely poem reminiscing on your love of many years. You will be united in time and see her lovely face again. Wishing you all the peace and love that life can offer, sir. May all your days be filled with nothing but the best memories and a life full of joy.

Thanks for posting a marvelous poem about love!

Have a wonderful week, Jay :))
Senyai

 Comment Written 15-Sep-2021

Comment from MissMerri

Excellent

This is a tender and sincere love poem Jay. I am glad you have so many years of happy memories to inspire you. Thank you for sharing your poems with us. I enjoyed this one especially. MM

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Comment from Mama Baer

Excellent

Dear Jaybird1,
Your poetry is beautiful and heartfelt. The words you select paint images in my mind of your eternal love for your sweetheart. I am confident you will be reunited one day. But keep writing and sharing with us your beautiful rhythms and rhymes.

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Comment from jenintorre

Excellent

I really enjoyed reading this poem and think comparing life to a candle really does make sense. I am sure you will meet your loved one again. Blessings. Jen.

 Comment Written 15-Sep-2021