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My feelings about being Pro Life and Pro Choice at the same

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Comment from Wendy G
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You have written so well on this very controversial topic. I am pro-life and feel that freedom to choose has become almost like a method of birth control with little regard for the rights of the baby. There are occasional extenuating circumstances warranting an abortion. But God knows and sees us and our lives from prior to birth. Women who do not want to keep their child should be offered support in giving it for adoption by some who can't have children but definitely want them. You have written with thought, wisdom, compassion and understanding- all of which I respect. It's a huge topic. Regardless of our views we need to respect the views of others. Excellent writing.

 Comment Written 15-Sep-2021


reply by the author on 15-Sep-2021
    Thank you so much. I have participated in raising two children that are not related to me by birth, but as I stated in a previous comment, they are related to me by love.
Comment from Seshadri_Sreenivasan
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The instant of birth is exquisite. Pain and joy are one at this moment. I think everybody is born into the world to do something unique and be a useful member of the community. I enjoyed your well-written thought-provoking poem. Thanks for sharing!

 Comment Written 15-Sep-2021


reply by the author on 15-Sep-2021
    Thank you for your gracious review comments.
Comment from pookietoo
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Nice poem on a sensitive subject. Keep up the great work writing your poems. I enjoyed reading this poem. Good luck to you and best wishes always. Keep smiling.

 Comment Written 15-Sep-2021


reply by the author on 15-Sep-2021
    Thank you. This was one of my most difficult to write. Primarily because the subject deserves consideration, much prayerful meditation, and a very careful presentation.
reply by pookietoo on 15-Sep-2021
    You are welcome.
Comment from Senyai
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Hi Nomi,

What a powerful sane write about abortion, for and against. People are all too many times either rabidly FOR or AGAINST with no in between thoughts applied. There are mitigating circumstances to every case of a pregnancy. A young girl, a woman who experiences rape or sexual assault in some form... or as you so deftly pointed out, just an unwise decision in unprotected sex has circumstances that are worth noting. A blanket decision to outlaw abortion is wrong. The decision should still be up to the pregnant person and her doctor and after very careful consideration a decision is made. I'm like you, Nomi. I am pro-life on the main, because Life is the most precious gift of all and all lives matter. Life starts at the moment of conception as God's hand is in there the moment sperm and egg unite. A heartbeat is detected at around six weeks but life has begun at conception. But if an abortion is decided on after everything is considered then that choice should be left to doctor and mother-to-be. An abortion should be allowed as the last choice to be performed by six weeks or so in a hospital setting.

Having an abortion is a life changing event and should never be taken lightly or used as a heinous form of birth control. The emotional turmoil before and after an abortion leaves a mark on the mother that will have long reaching effects in her life, so it is imperative she weigh her options carefully.

Late term abortion is criminal!

Your poem is such a timely thoughtful expression that needed to be said, Nomi. I am so glad you let the pros and cons be heard in your skillfully written verse.

Have a wonderful week :))
Senyai

 Comment Written 15-Sep-2021


reply by the author on 15-Sep-2021
    It would be criminal for me to use my license as a writer to only present one side of any argument, especially one involving the life of an innocent child. I debated long and hard over whether to even attempt to write on this difficult and emotional subject. Having strong feelings and opinions about the subject I realized that to remain silent would be wrong. Having decided too write about it, I was bound to do the best job possible to present it in a way that would not spark argument and denial but an appeal to listen and carefully consider the points that were raised.
reply by Senyai on 15-Sep-2021
    Nomi, you did a great job on the subject, abortion?.which is a hot button issue and very difficult to write about at all.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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This is a controversial subject and there is are many arguments for and against abortion. I believe that there are circumstances when abortion is a good thing and saves much heartache and women must retain the right to choose, a poignant and well written poem on a touchy subject, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 14-Sep-2021


reply by the author on 15-Sep-2021
    Thank you so much. I tried very hard not to give the impression of taking sides, as I truly do not have any skin in this particular game. Much respect to any woman who has had to even think about this most difficult decision.
reply by Dolly'sPoems on 16-Sep-2021
    You handled this with great care x x x
Comment from joycetreasures
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Hello Nomi338,

I love honesty, and I read you sincere and honest words in your poem. We don't have to agree or disagree with anyone's opinion about our/your feelings on abortion. I don't! I choose life, YET THEIR MAY BE EXCEPTIONS!!! Nice imagery! This is an excellent written poem Nomi. Period.

 Comment Written 14-Sep-2021


reply by the author on 14-Sep-2021
    I thank you so much for your generous supportive comments. I reall do appreciate you.
reply by joycetreasures on 15-Sep-2021
    You are so welcome. Always be true to yourself.
Comment from bob cullen
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Congratulations for standing so publicly and expressing your belief, that requires courage. You have voiced your opinion clearly. And I, another man, swayed undoubtedly by many years of religious education find myself in agreement with your final paragraph.
This was so well written.

 Comment Written 14-Sep-2021


reply by the author on 14-Sep-2021
    Thank you Brother Bob. I appreciate your brave and honest statements.
Comment from royowen
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This is a classic. I remember there was a meeting of "wise" men to decide when the time of life beginning was. So an even spread of men was chosen, men of religion, atheists and others. And they decided that the moment of conception was the beginning of life, if that be true then abortion is murder, plain and simple, God even goes back to the time before the world's foundation brother, brilliantly written, excellent post, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 14-Sep-2021


reply by the author on 14-Sep-2021
    Thank you my brother. God does not make mistakes. Sin however causes birth defects and many other problems within the human family.
reply by royowen on 14-Sep-2021
    Absolutely
Comment from Hitcher
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Yes, a poem which will garner many a differing reaction for sure friend. I have sat around tables when this subject has been brought up and watched fireworks explode and people seriously fall out. People of faith definitely leaning more to pro life and less to pro choice in my experience. It is a well written poem and I have no problems with it, we are all allowed to have a voice and make a choice : ))

 Comment Written 14-Sep-2021


reply by the author on 14-Sep-2021
    Thank you very much for your fine review comments.
Comment from lancellot
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I agree, it is a sticky subject. I too am neither Pro Choice or Pro life. There is too much hypocrisy and little logic in both camps for my taste. I can not believe I know what God intended for not. I do know this is well structured and crafted poem. It touch on three angles of the subject and does it in a respectful way.

Good work.

 Comment Written 14-Sep-2021


reply by the author on 14-Sep-2021
    Thank you so much. I appreciate your great comments.