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Haiku-shaped

syllables dance

2 total reviews 
Comment from Sherry Asbury
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Very clever and unique. You have adhered to the haiku line requirements. Your end line is clever and adds something special to your choice of words. Best of luck in the contest with this fine entry!

 Comment Written 13-Sep-2021

reply by the author on 11-Feb-2023
    Thanks!
Comment from SHABAMO
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First two lines hit on the key nature of the haiku, and show indeed there are "wings" to a haiku, and third keeps to that pattern and also incorporates nature. Very clever!

 Comment Written 13-Sep-2021

reply by the author on 11-Feb-2023
    Thanks!