Spring - My Favorite Season
What love about Spring10 total reviews
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
It is certain from this poem that you are an avid fan of spring. From the delights that you list, it is easy to guess that this is indeed your favourite season. However, I don't feel you have quite addressed the prompt of detscribing how the season AFFECTS you. It would be nice if you could add a last stanza explaining how all these things you love make you feel.
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2021
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It is certain from this poem that you are an avid fan of spring. From the delights that you list, it is easy to guess that this is indeed your favourite season. However, I don't feel you have quite addressed the prompt of detscribing how the season AFFECTS you. It would be nice if you could add a last stanza explaining how all these things you love make you feel.
Comment Written 16-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2021
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Thanks, I am not adding a stanza.
Comment from Jasmine Girl
what a beautiful poem about the spring. I love the rhyming and the repeat of "I love" to emphasis the love of the spring. I love spring, too, the flowers, the birds and bright colors.
Well done.
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2021
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what a beautiful poem about the spring. I love the rhyming and the repeat of "I love" to emphasis the love of the spring. I love spring, too, the flowers, the birds and bright colors.
Well done.
Comment Written 16-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2021
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Thanks.
Comment from Paul McFarland
Great subject, but the meter needs some work. When you start a line with "I love .....ing", this begs for a strong accent on the "I". Take a look at this and maybe play around with a rewrite.
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2021
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Great subject, but the meter needs some work. When you start a line with "I love .....ing", this begs for a strong accent on the "I". Take a look at this and maybe play around with a rewrite.
Comment Written 15-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2021
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I think the poem is fine unless you can offer suggestions.
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, Spring My Favorite Season, acknowledges the seeing, hearing, feeling, and simply loving of the elements of spring which separate it from the rest of the year. Nice.
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2021
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This poem, Spring My Favorite Season, acknowledges the seeing, hearing, feeling, and simply loving of the elements of spring which separate it from the rest of the year. Nice.
Comment Written 14-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2021
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Thanks. I am tied for fourth place.
Comment from Lynar
What I appreciated was the eye budding appeal. A quality
of softness and love of the rose in full bloom. The flow of
rhyme (trees, honeybees, bright, flight. It helped me to
engage, what the author felt. The image was perfect choice
for Spring. No more to add. Exceptional.
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2021
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What I appreciated was the eye budding appeal. A quality
of softness and love of the rose in full bloom. The flow of
rhyme (trees, honeybees, bright, flight. It helped me to
engage, what the author felt. The image was perfect choice
for Spring. No more to add. Exceptional.
Comment Written 14-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2021
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Thanks. I wish it would do great on the contest
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Thank You very much. Happy day.
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Comment from Carlos' girl
How lovely! There are some good little gems in this splendid tribute to spring. I love your natural rhymes; there is an element of surprise in them. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2021
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How lovely! There are some good little gems in this splendid tribute to spring. I love your natural rhymes; there is an element of surprise in them. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 14-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2021
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Thank you.
Comment from Frances Jean
I enjoyed reading your poem and sharing the joy of life and nature you portray. I too love all those things - the sunsets, walks on the beach with my husband, the flowers, birds, trees and the way the sun catches the rain drops on the tips of leaves and makes them sparkle. All the best Franky
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2021
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I enjoyed reading your poem and sharing the joy of life and nature you portray. I too love all those things - the sunsets, walks on the beach with my husband, the flowers, birds, trees and the way the sun catches the rain drops on the tips of leaves and makes them sparkle. All the best Franky
Comment Written 13-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2021
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Thank you.
Comment from C. Gale Burnett
So much lovely imagery. I felt your excitement about how Spring makes you feel. Every line was a different and splendid example of the many beautiful things that make Spring so special. When the first day of winter hits, I can't wait for spring to come back.
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2021
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So much lovely imagery. I felt your excitement about how Spring makes you feel. Every line was a different and splendid example of the many beautiful things that make Spring so special. When the first day of winter hits, I can't wait for spring to come back.
Comment Written 13-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2021
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Thanks, it's not doing well in the contest yet.
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Do not feel that is a reflection on your writing. Do not be discouraged. I know exactly how you feel because I have many times had the same experience.
I can tell you your poem was splendidly written and beautiful.
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Thanks.
Comment from Sally Law
I love spring too, because I love every flower. I am in the northern hemisphere where we are experiencing the transfer to Autumn. Roses are still here in abundance. I love each season's landscapes though.
Sending you my best today as always and best regards for the upcoming contest,
Sal :))
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2021
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I love spring too, because I love every flower. I am in the northern hemisphere where we are experiencing the transfer to Autumn. Roses are still here in abundance. I love each season's landscapes though.
Sending you my best today as always and best regards for the upcoming contest,
Sal :))
Comment Written 13-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2021
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Thanks.
Comment from PoemsOfDD
This is a good entry for the - Spring - writing prompt.
It has great visual and is uplifting. I can relate to all verses :-)
A slight edit in ( ), if I may - as shown at the start of your piece.
Wh(a)t I love about Spring
Good luck and thank you for sharing. ~DD
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2021
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This is a good entry for the - Spring - writing prompt.
It has great visual and is uplifting. I can relate to all verses :-)
A slight edit in ( ), if I may - as shown at the start of your piece.
Wh(a)t I love about Spring
Good luck and thank you for sharing. ~DD
Comment Written 13-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2021
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Thanks.