Comment from Jasmine Girl

Excellent

I agree with you that music can heal, can talk to you and can make you happy. Some children are gifted like my nephew who could sing before he could talk. Now he is an actor.

I think the last line can be a better one to conclude the poem.

Well done.

 Comment Written 16-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 16-Sep-2021

You think I should change the last line?

Comment from SHABAMO

Excellent

Excellent short story and perspective on this prompt. While I'm not musical myself I think it's fantastic you use it as a way of praise. I like your rhyme scheme throughout the poem

 Comment Written 12-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 12-Sep-2021

Yes excellent poem.

Comment from Pantygynt

Excellent

You were given the option of reacting to this prompt in either poetry or prose. This is without a doubt a poetic reaction to that prompt despite being entered as General Fiction, because it is set out in quatrains of rhyming couplets, and the word count of 121 is less than than the minimum for a prose work.

It is certainly 'about' music detailing several different types.

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 Comment Written 12-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 12-Sep-2021

Thanks for your review