The Diary
5 line poem contest7 total reviews
Comment from pookietoo
A nice 5 line poem entry. A very nice photo too. Keep up the great poetry writing. Good luck in the contest. Best wishes and keep smiling. Keep sharing your poems with us.
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2021
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A nice 5 line poem entry. A very nice photo too. Keep up the great poetry writing. Good luck in the contest. Best wishes and keep smiling. Keep sharing your poems with us.
Comment Written 15-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2021
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You are welcome. I would appreciate it if you would review my Jessica's Year of Nature story.
Comment from Sugarray77
Hello! This is a fun and romantic verse you have crafted for the 5 Line Poem prompt. I really enjoyed reading it and think your chosen artwork is a big plus ... it sets the stage for the verse. Well done.
MelissHi Linda. Thank you for your wonderful review. You always encourage me so much!!! I really appreciate your time to comment on this one. I have not written an alliterative piece in a long time and wanted to practice. :). Hugs!
Melissaa
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2021
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Hello! This is a fun and romantic verse you have crafted for the 5 Line Poem prompt. I really enjoyed reading it and think your chosen artwork is a big plus ... it sets the stage for the verse. Well done.
MelissHi Linda. Thank you for your wonderful review. You always encourage me so much!!! I really appreciate your time to comment on this one. I have not written an alliterative piece in a long time and wanted to practice. :). Hugs!
Melissaa
Comment Written 12-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2021
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Comment from Bill Schott
This five-line poem, The Diary, has the proper formatting and keeps the hopes and fruition of dreams locked up for later perusal. ..................,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2021
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This five-line poem, The Diary, has the proper formatting and keeps the hopes and fruition of dreams locked up for later perusal. ..................,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
Comment Written 12-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2021
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Comment from Mary Shifman
This is a charming poem. Diaries always remind me of teenage girls with wistful hearts and day-dreams. I wonder if girls still write in diaries or do they put their feelings and hopes on an iPad or laptop? It doesn't seem as romantic that way.
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2021
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This is a charming poem. Diaries always remind me of teenage girls with wistful hearts and day-dreams. I wonder if girls still write in diaries or do they put their feelings and hopes on an iPad or laptop? It doesn't seem as romantic that way.
Comment Written 12-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2021
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Comment from Pantygynt
The diary , locked shut in this case if the picture is to be believed, contains one's innermost intimate thoughts, therfore it remains private, for youre eyes only.
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2021
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The diary , locked shut in this case if the picture is to be believed, contains one's innermost intimate thoughts, therfore it remains private, for youre eyes only.
Comment Written 12-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2021
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Comment from dragonpoet
This is a good poetic descrption of a diary. Its words maybe can inspire more heartfelt poems. The writer just needs to unlock his/her secrets and share them.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
dragonpoet
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2021
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This is a good poetic descrption of a diary. Its words maybe can inspire more heartfelt poems. The writer just needs to unlock his/her secrets and share them.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
dragonpoet
Comment Written 12-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2021
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Comment from Carlos' girl
I like it. I love the phrase "adorned with kisses". Now i also like the pink font script with the deep plum background and the pink diary. Very nice image choice
Good poem good word flow
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2021
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I like it. I love the phrase "adorned with kisses". Now i also like the pink font script with the deep plum background and the pink diary. Very nice image choice
Good poem good word flow
Comment Written 12-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2021
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