Visiting Far Away
A kids story in a poem2 total reviews
Comment from Mama Baer
Well, this is adorable! You chose a delightful selection of words and captured the feelings of two young cousins who only want to be together and play. I would say you nailed that feeling, actually! I can just see them in my mind's eye with their purple matching blouses. Thank you for sharing!
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2021
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Well, this is adorable! You chose a delightful selection of words and captured the feelings of two young cousins who only want to be together and play. I would say you nailed that feeling, actually! I can just see them in my mind's eye with their purple matching blouses. Thank you for sharing!
Comment Written 11-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2021
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Awe. Thank You for this sweet review 😊
Comment from Nubian Queen Shyt
I loved this so much! I really enjoyed it! The most joy came from how you maintained telling the story while still maintaining a healthy rhyming flow in which is much harder than some may thank so great execution!!!
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2021
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I loved this so much! I really enjoyed it! The most joy came from how you maintained telling the story while still maintaining a healthy rhyming flow in which is much harder than some may thank so great execution!!!
Comment Written 11-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2021
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Thank you so much for your kind review 😊
