Comment from mermaids

Excellent

I enjoyed reading your quirky poem and how you use words,I or eye, born or egged? You have a creative use of words and I also like how this poem has many questions.

 Comment Written 10-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 10-Sep-2021

Sometimes when I start this writing I can click into many styles and people either appreciate it or don't understand it.
Sometimes I'll take Stars away based on that or grammar and I have to correct them that it's not the grammar it's the content which is important.
And everybody here has a different type of writing style and everybody's always learning and sharing!
And thanks for sharing your time!
Doctor Ricky 1024

Comment from SHABAMO

Excellent

I really liked the deliberate misspellings and the comedy you put into this. If it was art it would be avant-garde for sure...good use of satire and deliberately confusing elements that paint a larger picture of life's confusion.

 Comment Written 10-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 10-Sep-2021

I have multiple personalities and there's a writing ability with each one!
You'll notice that as you review and thanks again for your time and review!
Doctor Ricky 1024