Ripples of Foam
FreeVerse44 total reviews
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
This is a Very beautifully written free verse poem. Showing a deep appreciation of the salt air the sand and the foamy waves, I like this the moment is and I am, it is enough.
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2021
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This is a Very beautifully written free verse poem. Showing a deep appreciation of the salt air the sand and the foamy waves, I like this the moment is and I am, it is enough.
Comment Written 12-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2021
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Hello Joanne. Thank you so much for the lovely comments and review. I am delighted you walked along the beach with me!! :)
Melissa
Comment from amahra
I loved the artwork you've chosen for your writing. I think it's very appropriated for the poem. The poem is well worded and carries a great message for the reader. Fantastic job.
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2021
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I loved the artwork you've chosen for your writing. I think it's very appropriated for the poem. The poem is well worded and carries a great message for the reader. Fantastic job.
Comment Written 12-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2021
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Hello amahra. Thank you for your lovely comments in this review. So glad you enjoyed this little FreeVerse. I don't write them often, but hope to do more in the coming weeks. :). Thanks again!
Melissa
Comment from Raul1
I think that this poem is comforting and interesting. I am glad you have found comfort in your poetry. Excellent work! No mistakes found. Thank you for sharing!
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2021
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I think that this poem is comforting and interesting. I am glad you have found comfort in your poetry. Excellent work! No mistakes found. Thank you for sharing!
Comment Written 11-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2021
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Hello Raul. Thank you for your lovely comments in this review. So glad you enjoyed this little FreeVerse. I don't write them often, but hope to do more in the coming weeks. :). Thanks again!
Melissa
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You're welcome! :)
Comment from Paul McFarland
Nice job. Is "warm sand and briny froth" a metaphor? Should "it" be capitalized in the last line? Your poem creates a certain mood that puts the reader at ease.
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2021
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Nice job. Is "warm sand and briny froth" a metaphor? Should "it" be capitalized in the last line? Your poem creates a certain mood that puts the reader at ease.
Comment Written 11-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2021
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Hello Paul. Thank you for your lovely comments in this review. So glad you enjoyed this little FreeVerse. I don't write them often, but hope to do more in the coming weeks. :). Thanks again!
Melissa
Comment from Patty Palmer
You describe the sand between your toes and the water surrounding your feet. That's the way I feel whenever we go to the lake. It's my most favorite place in the world. I love the end of your poem because it sums up my feelings too. The moment is, and I am... it is enough. Great job!
Patty
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2021
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You describe the sand between your toes and the water surrounding your feet. That's the way I feel whenever we go to the lake. It's my most favorite place in the world. I love the end of your poem because it sums up my feelings too. The moment is, and I am... it is enough. Great job!
Patty
Comment Written 11-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2021
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Hello Patty. Thank you for your lovely comments in this review. So glad you enjoyed this little FreeVerse. I don't write them often, but hope to do more in the coming weeks. :). Thanks again!
Melissa
Comment from Janet Foor
Beautiful picture of a sandy beach to set the tone for this lovely free verse poem. You paint a vivid picture of the ocean air with your well chosen words that add to the message.
Well done.
Blessings
Janet
A superb free verse here. :))
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2021
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Beautiful picture of a sandy beach to set the tone for this lovely free verse poem. You paint a vivid picture of the ocean air with your well chosen words that add to the message.
Well done.
Blessings
Janet
A superb free verse here. :))
Comment Written 11-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2021
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Hello Janet. Thank you for your lovely and encouraging comments!!!
Melissa
Comment from SHABAMO
Great all around poem here, I think your clear and vivid descriptions are what makes it special though. The briny froth in particular I liked. This is even more powerful with the clever alliteration sprinkled throughout!
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2021
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Great all around poem here, I think your clear and vivid descriptions are what makes it special though. The briny froth in particular I liked. This is even more powerful with the clever alliteration sprinkled throughout!
Comment Written 11-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2021
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Hello there! Thank you for your lovely comments in this review. So glad you enjoyed this little FreeVerse. I don't write them often, but hope to do more in the coming weeks. :). Thanks again!
Melissa
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice image and
presentation, Melissa.
-A well written poem
with a good topic and imagery.
-You paint a vivid word
picture of walking along
the "curling ripples of foam."
-You also create a peaceful mood.
-Very good concluding lines, too.
-Have a good day and weekend, too.
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2021
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-Very nice image and
presentation, Melissa.
-A well written poem
with a good topic and imagery.
-You paint a vivid word
picture of walking along
the "curling ripples of foam."
-You also create a peaceful mood.
-Very good concluding lines, too.
-Have a good day and weekend, too.
Comment Written 11-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2021
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Hello Pam. Thank you for your lovely comments in this review. So glad you enjoyed this little FreeVerse. I don't write them often, but hope to do more in the coming weeks. :). Thanks again!
Melissa
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You are very welcome, Melissa. I am not good with free verse.
Comment from Seshadri_Sreenivasan
Beautifully penned poem . It made me mentally compare life with the waves. Ever changing. Although made up of same particles. The sight and sound of waves at the beach has an incredibly calming effect. Much enjoyed. Thanks for sharing!
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2021
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Beautifully penned poem . It made me mentally compare life with the waves. Ever changing. Although made up of same particles. The sight and sound of waves at the beach has an incredibly calming effect. Much enjoyed. Thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 11-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2021
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Hello Seshadri. Thank you for your lovely comments in this review. So glad you enjoyed this little FreeVerse. I don't write them often, but hope to do more in the coming weeks. :). Thanks again!
Melissa
Comment from Gloria ....
That truly is a pristine beach. And the tone of this is most fitting for a serene walk along the edge of the water.
I love the line, contentment fills my lungs, because that is just the thing with ocean air.
A superb free verse here. :))
Gloria
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2021
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That truly is a pristine beach. And the tone of this is most fitting for a serene walk along the edge of the water.
I love the line, contentment fills my lungs, because that is just the thing with ocean air.
A superb free verse here. :))
Gloria
Comment Written 11-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2021
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Hello Gloria. Thank you for your lovely comments in this review. So glad you enjoyed this little FreeVerse. I don't write them often, but hope to do more in the coming weeks. :). Thanks again!
Melissa
