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Our Nights & Mornings - The ABCs

In my world, the nights and mornings with kids are special

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Comment from Mary Kay Bonfante
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Your abecedarian children's poem meets the requirements of the contest, but is also very endearing. I've never had children of my own, but tucking them into bed must be a sweet and special task. I remember staying with relatives, when their children were small, and hearing the babies make sweet babbling noises in their cribs, then when a little older, actually coming to ME in the morning to wake me up, jumping all over, and cheerfully encouraging me to start the day... nights and mornings are certainly a precious time with children.

 Comment Written 09-Sep-2021


reply by the author on 09-Sep-2021
    Sure glad you stopped by and found my offering endearing! That is a nice thing for sure. If the prompt had demanded a poem about teenage daughters, we had three, there would be nothing endearing about it!
reply by Mary Kay Bonfante on 10-Sep-2021
    Hahahaha! I'm sure you loved them anyway, but those years had to be harder than the rest. I know I gave my mother some gray hairs, during my adolescence. But our love today is stronger than ever. Good moms and dads are a precious gift, as I'm sure children are, also. May God bless you and your family. - Mary Kay
Comment from papa55mike
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We all need zany in these times. Especially, kids, they're caught up in all this drama that they don't understand. What a wonderfully written poem.

Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike

 Comment Written 09-Sep-2021


reply by the author on 09-Sep-2021
    Zany is good. It is refreshing. It is usually associated with laughter. Dads are naturally equipped for zany, moms being more matter-of-fact. Full disclosure: I am now 73 and I have not lost my zany! Thanks for stopping by.
reply by papa55mike on 12-Sep-2021
    Don't ever lose that zany!