GreenB
A story where every character has a disguise.2 total reviews
Comment from papa55mike
It seems we all hide behind masks pretending to be the person we dream of. Please check this line; "Well, John said, "tech, you need a quotation mark for "Well,". What a wonderfully written story.
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2021
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It seems we all hide behind masks pretending to be the person we dream of. Please check this line; "Well, John said, "tech, you need a quotation mark for "Well,". What a wonderfully written story.
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 09-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2021
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Hi papa55mike!
Thank you for the excellent rating and your feedback. I will correct that line immediately. Have a blessed weekend.
Comment from lancellot
Very interesting concept.
"Well,["] John said, "technicians walk around a lot. It's a good cover as we perform our real duties in the Exhibition Hall."
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Quiet, GreenB thought. Quiet.
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"Quiet," GreenB thought. "Quiet."
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2021
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Very interesting concept.
"Well,["] John said, "technicians walk around a lot. It's a good cover as we perform our real duties in the Exhibition Hall."
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Quiet, GreenB thought. Quiet.
change to:
"Quiet," GreenB thought. "Quiet."
Comment Written 09-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2021
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Hi lancellot!
Thank you for the excellent rating and the feedback. I will correct the error immediately. Have a blessed weekend.
