Call of Fall
The inevitable end of summer.5 total reviews
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi Shauna,
I like this mono-rhyme 1-6-1 poem. I think a lot or people look forward to get out of the heat and humidity of the Summer for the cooler days of Fall. Also, the changing of the leaves adds its own beauty.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
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Hi Shauna,
I like this mono-rhyme 1-6-1 poem. I think a lot or people look forward to get out of the heat and humidity of the Summer for the cooler days of Fall. Also, the changing of the leaves adds its own beauty.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
Comment Written 08-Feb-2023
Comment from lyenochka
I think if we took a survey of all the writers here - Autumn would probably have the highest number of votes for the favorite season. Great job with your 1-6-1 with the rhyming and the simple description of "shorter days; sweaters call." Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2021
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I think if we took a survey of all the writers here - Autumn would probably have the highest number of votes for the favorite season. Great job with your 1-6-1 with the rhyming and the simple description of "shorter days; sweaters call." Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 11-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2021
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Thank you! Isn't it fun to play with words and try to capture so much with so little? Yay for the fall! Thank you for taking the time to read my poem and for leaving such a positive review!
Comment from Giddy Nielsen-Sweep
A very well constructed poem as required. I really like this one because it is cleverly rhymed as well. In particular the cute picture gives your readers a smile. A very cheerful poem, Giddy
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2021
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A very well constructed poem as required. I really like this one because it is cleverly rhymed as well. In particular the cute picture gives your readers a smile. A very cheerful poem, Giddy
Comment Written 10-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2021
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Dear Giddy, thanks so much for taking the time to read my poem! Isn't it fun to place words into poetry? Like working on a crossword puzzle! And I thought the picture was adorable. Thanks again, and happy Fall!
Comment from pookietoo
Excellent job. Keep smiling always. Keep up the wonderful work writing your poems. Good luck to you and best wishes always. I enjoyed reading this poem.
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2021
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Excellent job. Keep smiling always. Keep up the wonderful work writing your poems. Good luck to you and best wishes always. I enjoyed reading this poem.
Comment Written 10-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2021
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Thank you again, Pookietoo! So fun to see you back again as my cheerleader!
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Comment from Tarekwrites
I love fall! I love sweaters!! This got me Really Excited for fall and with so few words to do so so well done! Good job rhyming as well with each line
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2021
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I love fall! I love sweaters!! This got me Really Excited for fall and with so few words to do so so well done! Good job rhyming as well with each line
Comment Written 09-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2021
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Oh, thank you!! I love to play with words and get excited about the challenge of staying in tight boundaries. I am glad you liked it! Thank you for your kind review.
