Comment from C. Gale Burnett

Excellent

I wish they would bring back those sweet vintage cards. This is an adorable 1-6-1. Your poem and chosen artwork are perfect for each other. I enjoyed the 'shh' sounds throughout; great rhyme. A wonderful contest entry.

 Comment Written 10-Sep-2021

---

reply by the author on 10-Sep-2021

hey there Gale... I am so glad you liked this verse... it is fun to think of rhymes for this type of challenge. there are a lot of vintage cards and valentines on Ebay ~ I happen to be a seller of such cards (not this particular one). It truly is a lost art, but collector's still like them. Thank you!

reply by C. Gale Burnett on 11-Sep-2021

Hey ... thanks bunches for that info.
Again, that was a beautiful 1-6-1 you created.

Comment from tempeste

Excellent

Ciao poet!

You now have 2 votes!

The pic is cute and I enjoyed reading your wee poem.

I m an expert on crushes ( biggrin)
mainly for film stars or characters on TV series that I find interesting.

I know it's ridiculous..I mean they're fictional yet I get all wrapped in them .

Good thing I m totally single ( biggrin)

My first ever crush as a kid was for Richard Burton , then Peter O'Toole and James Dean.

I even wanted to follow in his footsteps and die at 23.

When I finally got there I change my mind and passed onto Billy Bob Thornton.. I loved the rebel spirit.

I better stop here , I have already made a fool of myself enough. ( wink)

 Comment Written 10-Sep-2021

---

reply by the author on 10-Sep-2021

Thank you so very much, Franca. I loved reading about your "crushes". So fun. I appreciate the vote!!!!!

Comment from rspoet

Excellent

This is an excellent 1-6-1 poem for the contest
with correct syllables that many on fanstory will relate to.
Looks like something the could be on a greeting card.
Nicely done.
Best wishes.
Robert

 Comment Written 08-Sep-2021

---

reply by the author on 08-Sep-2021

Hey there, Robert... thanks so much!! It was fun to work with this one. :)

reply by the author on 08-Sep-2021

Hey there, Robert... thanks so much!! It was fun to work with this one. :)

reply by the author on 08-Sep-2021

Hey there, Robert... thanks so much!! It was fun to work with this one. :)

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This 1-6-1, Hush Hush, has the proper formatting and makes the reader lan towards the notion of love and possiblities with another. Love is in the air. Nice.

 Comment Written 08-Sep-2021

---

reply by the author on 08-Sep-2021

Thanks so much, Bill!